diff --git a/app/views/content-design/writing-inside-design-page/index.html b/app/views/content-design/writing-inside-design-page/index.html
index 221d4509..29e56f7e 100644
--- a/app/views/content-design/writing-inside-design-page/index.html
+++ b/app/views/content-design/writing-inside-design-page/index.html
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ <h2>Purpose</h2>
   <p>
     The content you add to your inside design page should be specific to your product or service. It should give an update on the status of your team's work.
   </p><p>
-    The purpose of the page is to keep people informed and offer opportunities for them to get involved through show and tells, research, or webinars.
+    The purpose of the page is to keep stakeholders interested in your project informed. You can also use them to inform them of opportunities to get involved with your teams engagement acitivites, such as research, workshops or webinars.
     </p><p>
     By working in the open, you can involve people who may not be in your user group that are affected by your services.
     </p><p>
diff --git a/app/views/inside-design/projects/education-health-care-plan.html b/app/views/inside-design/projects/education-health-care-plan.html
index 60ad6d1b..5d2f83e8 100644
--- a/app/views/inside-design/projects/education-health-care-plan.html
+++ b/app/views/inside-design/projects/education-health-care-plan.html
@@ -102,9 +102,9 @@ <h2 class="govuk-heading-l">Discovery activity</h2>
                         <li>families</li>
                         <li>digital system suppliers</li>
                         </ul>
-                <p>The team conducted two deep dives with local authorities (LA) who have established digital EHCP systems in place. They spoke to a wide range of LAs, education and healthcare professionals based in that region, and to local families who had used the software.​ This led to an understanding of LA and other professionals' experiences of procuring, implementing and using a digital EHCP hub.<p>
+                <p>The team conducted two deep dives with local authorities (LAs) who have established digital EHCP systems in place. They spoke to a wide range of LAs, education and healthcare professionals based in that region, and to local families who had used the software.​ This led to an understanding of LA and other professionals' experiences of procuring, implementing and using a digital EHCP hub.<p>
                 <p>The team also reviewed a selection of local authority digital EHCP systems. They considered how information is captured and whether better communication could improve efficiency.<p>
-                <p>Working with digital Case Management System (CMS) and digital EHCP system providers, the team looked to better understand the products and services on offer.</p>
+                <p>Working with digital Case Management System (CMS) and digital EHCP system suppliers, the team looked to better understand the products and services on offer.</p>
             </div>
         </div>