From 187e9a6b1cb9b5d2f1ac951b582679e9e3a2a9e9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: emmaachesongray <168454683+emmaachesongray@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 2 Jan 2025 14:11:38 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] content tweaks

---
 .../pay-and-benefits/_categories.html.erb                 | 2 +-
 .../life-as-a-teacher/pay-and-benefits/why-teach.md       | 2 +-
 .../pay-and-benefits/why-teach/_article.html.erb          | 8 ++++----
 3 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/pay-and-benefits/_categories.html.erb b/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/pay-and-benefits/_categories.html.erb
index dbbe201c5a..d860c28ec8 100644
--- a/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/pay-and-benefits/_categories.html.erb
+++ b/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/pay-and-benefits/_categories.html.erb
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
           <%= render Categories::CardComponent.new(heading_tag: "h2", card:
             OpenStruct.new(
               title: "Why become a teacher",
-              description: "Explore the many reasons why you should become a teacher in England. From making a difference, exploring your creativity, holidays, pay, and much more.",
+              description: "Explore the many reasons why you should become a teacher in England. From making a difference to exploring your creativity, holidays, pay, and much more.",
               path: "/life-as-a-teacher/pay-and-benefits/why-teach",
             )) %>
           <%= render Categories::CardComponent.new(heading_tag: "h2", card:
diff --git a/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/pay-and-benefits/why-teach.md b/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/pay-and-benefits/why-teach.md
index 9f76a2f05c..c7bf266af1 100644
--- a/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/pay-and-benefits/why-teach.md
+++ b/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/pay-and-benefits/why-teach.md
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 ---
 title: Why become a teacher
 description: |- 
-  Explore the many reasons why you should become a teacher in England. From making a difference, exploring your creativity, holidays, pay, and much more.
+  Explore the many reasons why you should become a teacher in England. From making a difference to exploring your creativity, holidays, pay, and much more.
 layout: "layouts/minimal"
 colour: pastel yellow-yellow
 image: "static/images/content/hero-images/0036.jpg"
diff --git a/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/pay-and-benefits/why-teach/_article.html.erb b/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/pay-and-benefits/why-teach/_article.html.erb
index e700f166fa..e9781bb5c2 100644
--- a/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/pay-and-benefits/why-teach/_article.html.erb
+++ b/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/pay-and-benefits/why-teach/_article.html.erb
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 <div class="row inset">
   <section class="col col-720 col-space-l-top">
-    <p>There’s no career quite like teaching. From sharing your passion for a subject, to having a job where every day is different, there’s lots of reasons why people across the world choose to become teachers in England.</p>
+    <p>There’s no career quite like teaching. From sharing your passion for a subject, to having a job where every day is different, there’s lots of reasons why people choose to become teachers in England.</p>
 
     <h2 class="heading--box-blue">Make a difference</h2>
 
-    <p>From day one as a teacher, you’ll be empowered to make decisions and have an impact. Every lesson you teach or conversation you have in a school corridor, has the opportunity to inspire your pupils, shape their futures, and the world around them.</p>
+    <p>From day one as a teacher, you’ll be empowered to make decisions and have an impact. Every lesson you teach or conversation you have in a school corridor has the opportunity to inspire your pupils, shape their futures, and the world around them.</p>
 
     <p><%= render 'content/shared/quotes/quote_why_teach_chelsea' %></p>
 
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
 
     <h2 class="heading--box-blue">Explore your creativity</h2>
 
-    <p>As a teacher, you’ll have the freedom and trust to use your knowledge, passion and creativity to teach curriculums in your own way. From themed learning days and engaging challenges to creative wall displays, you can bring your personality and passion to the classroom from the very first day.</p>
+    <p>As a teacher, you’ll have the freedom and trust to use your knowledge, passion and creativity to teach curriculums in your own way. From themed learning days and engaging activities to creative wall displays, you can bring your personality and passion to the classroom from the very first day.</p>
 
     <p><%= render 'content/shared/quotes/quote_why_teach_helen' %></p>
 
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
 
     <h2 class="heading--box-blue">Career progression</h2>
 
-    <p>here’s a clear trajectory for career progression in teaching, and you can progress at your own pace.</p>
+    <p>In teaching, there are lots of opportunities for progression and self development. You can progress your career at your own pace, and tailor your journey to your interests and goals.</p>
 
     <p><%= render 'content/shared/quotes/quote_why_teach_gloria' %></p>