diff --git a/app/views/mailing_list/steps/_name.html.erb b/app/views/mailing_list/steps/_name.html.erb
index 46dd8f430a..60806f31c9 100644
--- a/app/views/mailing_list/steps/_name.html.erb
+++ b/app/views/mailing_list/steps/_name.html.erb
@@ -1,20 +1,9 @@
-<h1>Get personalised guidance on teacher training in your inbox</h1>
+<h1>Free personalised teacher training guidance</h1>
 
 <p>
-If you're interested in training to teach in primary, secondary and special schools in England, get everything you need to know to start a career in teaching.
+Discover everything you need to know to start a teaching career in England, sent straight to your inbox. Personalised to you, we'll send you the latest information as well as advice and support.
 </p>
 
-<p>
-Find out how to get:
-</p>
-
-<ul>
-  <li> a taste of life in the classroom</li>
-  <li> funding to train</li>
-  <li> one-to-one support</li>
-  <li> advice from trainees or recently qualified teachers</li>
-</ul>
-
 <%= f.govuk_text_field :first_name, width: 'two-thirds', autocomplete: "given-name" %>
 <%= f.govuk_text_field :last_name, width: 'two-thirds', autocomplete: "family-name" %>
 <%= f.govuk_email_field :email, width: 'two-thirds', autocomplete: "email" %>
@@ -22,6 +11,4 @@ Find out how to get:
 <%= f.hidden_field :sub_channel_id, value: params[:sub_channel] || f.object.sub_channel_id %>
 <%= f.hidden_field :accepted_policy_id, value: f.object.latest_privacy_policy.id %>
 
-<p>Your details are protected under the terms of our <%= link_to("privacy notice (opens in new tab)", privacy_policy_path(id: f.object.latest_privacy_policy.id), { target: :blank }) %>.</p>
-
-<p>Our privacy notice explains how we use your personal data. It's important you read this before signing up to receive emails.</p>
+<p>Your details are protected under the terms of our <%= link_to("privacy notice (opens in new tab)", privacy_policy_path(id: f.object.latest_privacy_policy.id), { target: :blank }) %>. This explains how we use your personal data. It's important you read this before signing up to receive emails.</p>
diff --git a/docs/sign-up-journeys.md b/docs/sign-up-journeys.md
index 3118ea7a8a..5ac22181e4 100644
--- a/docs/sign-up-journeys.md
+++ b/docs/sign-up-journeys.md
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ There are multiple different sign up journeys available on the Get into Teaching
 
 ```mermaid
 graph TD;
-  name[Get personalised guidance on teacher training in your inbox] -- Doesn't exist in CRM --> returning_teacher[Are you already qualified to teach?]
+  name[Free personalised teacher training guidance] -- Doesn't exist in CRM --> returning_teacher[Are you already qualified to teach?]
   name -- Exists in CRM --> authenticate[You're already registered with us]
   
   returning_teacher -- Yes --> already_qualified[We're sorry, but our emails are for people who are not already qualified to teach]
diff --git a/spec/features/mailing_list_wizard_spec.rb b/spec/features/mailing_list_wizard_spec.rb
index 088be81796..e3a421ac91 100644
--- a/spec/features/mailing_list_wizard_spec.rb
+++ b/spec/features/mailing_list_wizard_spec.rb
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
 
     expect(page).to have_title(mailing_list_page_title)
 
-    expect(page).to have_text "Get personalised guidance on teacher training in your inbox"
+    expect(page).to have_text "Free personalised teacher training guidance"
     fill_in_name_step
     click_on "Next step"
 
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
     channel_id = channels.first.id
     visit mailing_list_steps_path({ id: :name, channel: channel_id, sub_channel: sub_channel_id })
 
-    expect(page).to have_text "Get personalised guidance on teacher training in your inbox"
+    expect(page).to have_text "Free personalised teacher training guidance"
     # Error to ensure channel/sub-channel persists over page reload.
     click_on "Next step"
     expect(page).to have_text("Enter your full email address")
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@
     channel_id = channels.first.id
     visit mailing_list_steps_path({ id: :name, channel: channel_id, sub_channel: sub_channel_id })
 
-    expect(page).to have_text("Get personalised guidance on teacher training in your inbox")
+    expect(page).to have_text("Free personalised teacher training guidance")
     fill_in_name_step
     click_on "Next step"
 
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@
 
     visit mailing_list_steps_path({ id: :name, channel: "invalid", sub_channel: sub_channel_id })
 
-    expect(page).to have_text "Get personalised guidance on teacher training in your inbox"
+    expect(page).to have_text "Free personalised teacher training guidance"
     fill_in_name_step
     click_on "Next step"
 
@@ -179,7 +179,7 @@
 
     visit mailing_list_steps_path
 
-    expect(page).to have_text "Get personalised guidance on teacher training in your inbox"
+    expect(page).to have_text "Free personalised teacher training guidance"
     fill_in_name_step(first_name: first_name)
     click_on "Next step"
 
@@ -219,7 +219,7 @@
 
     visit mailing_list_steps_path
 
-    expect(page).to have_text "Get personalised guidance on teacher training in your inbox"
+    expect(page).to have_text "Free personalised teacher training guidance"
     fill_in_name_step
     click_on "Next step"
 
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@
 
     visit mailing_list_steps_path
 
-    expect(page).to have_text "Get personalised guidance on teacher training in your inbox"
+    expect(page).to have_text "Free personalised teacher training guidance"
     fill_in_name_step
     click_on "Next step"
 
@@ -274,7 +274,7 @@
 
     visit mailing_list_steps_path
 
-    expect(page).to have_text "Get personalised guidance on teacher training in your inbox"
+    expect(page).to have_text "Free personalised teacher training guidance"
     fill_in_name_step
     click_on "Next step"
 
@@ -298,7 +298,7 @@
 
     visit mailing_list_steps_path
 
-    expect(page).to have_text "Get personalised guidance on teacher training in your inbox"
+    expect(page).to have_text "Free personalised teacher training guidance"
     fill_in_name_step
     click_on "Next step"
 
@@ -378,7 +378,7 @@
 
     visit mailing_list_steps_path
 
-    expect(page).to have_text "Get personalised guidance on teacher training in your inbox"
+    expect(page).to have_text "Free personalised teacher training guidance"
     fill_in_name_step
     click_on "Next step"
 
@@ -395,7 +395,7 @@
     allow_any_instance_of(GetIntoTeachingApiClient::CandidatesApi).to \
       receive(:create_candidate_access_token).and_raise(GetIntoTeachingApiClient::ApiError)
 
-    expect(page).to have_text "Get personalised guidance on teacher training in your inbox"
+    expect(page).to have_text "Free personalised teacher training guidance"
     fill_in_name_step(email: "test2@user.com")
     click_on "Next step"