diff --git a/app/views/pages/dfe_signin_help.html.erb b/app/views/pages/dfe_signin_help.html.erb
index 30b2b35f04..4e596b939b 100644
--- a/app/views/pages/dfe_signin_help.html.erb
+++ b/app/views/pages/dfe_signin_help.html.erb
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 
 
     <p>
-      You need a DfE Sign-in account username and password to manage school
+      You need a DfE Sign-in account, username and password to manage school
       experience for an organisation.
     </p>
 
@@ -21,8 +21,7 @@
     </div>
 
     <p>
-      Don't worry if you don't have or don't know your details - all you need to
-      do is contact your organisation's DfE Sign-in approver.
+      If you do not have, or have forgotten your details, contact your organisation's DfE Sign-in approver.
     </p>
 
     <p>
@@ -52,7 +51,7 @@
         </div>
         <div id="accordion-default-content-3" class="govuk-accordion__section-content" aria-labelledby="accordion-default-heading-3">
             <p>Your approver will normally be the head or deputy head.<p>
-            <p>If they're not or you're not sure, don't worry. We just need to get some of your details so we can find them. Email our School Experience
+            <p>If your head or deputy head is not the approver, or you're not sure, you can email our School Experience
             Service team at <%= mail_to 'organise.school-experience@education.gov.uk' %>.</p>
             <p>We'll be in touch within 3 to 5 working days.</p>
         </div>
diff --git a/app/views/schools/show.html.erb b/app/views/schools/show.html.erb
index 3ac3f45d23..a964eece28 100644
--- a/app/views/schools/show.html.erb
+++ b/app/views/schools/show.html.erb
@@ -59,12 +59,12 @@
 
       <p>
         The service will ask you to outline the kind of experience you
-        offer including details about DBS-checks and any fees you charge candidates.
+        offer including details about DBS checks and any fees you charge candidates.
       </p>
 
       <p>
         It's your responsibility to decide if candidates comply with your
-        school DBS and safeguarding policies.
+        school's DBS and safeguarding policies.
       </p>
     </section>
   </div>