diff --git a/draft-ietf-anima-rfc8366bis.md b/draft-ietf-anima-rfc8366bis.md index f7a644a..ee4f197 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-anima-rfc8366bis.md +++ b/draft-ietf-anima-rfc8366bis.md @@ -292,7 +292,7 @@ Assertion Basis: the imprint (this is distinct from the voucher signature that protects the voucher itself). This includes manufacturer-asserted ownership verification, assured - logging operations, or reliance on Pledge endpoint behavior + logging operations, or reliance on Pledge behavior such as secure root of trust of measurement. The join registrar uses this information to make a determination as to whether to accept the Pledge intot he network. Only some methods are normatively defined in this @@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ Anti-Replay Protections: A number of onboarding scenarios can be met using differing combinations of this information. All scenarios address the primary threat of an on-path active attacker (or MiTM) impersonating the registrar. -This would gain control over the Pledge device. +This would gain control over the Pledge. The following combinations are "types" of vouchers: | | Assertion || Registrar ID || Validity |