[PD] Giving feedback on the e-mails

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Coursework content

In pairs, within your groups review 1 of the 3 written emails on the issue Writing a meeting request email. Provide objective feedback and actionable improvement points for either person’s English or the content itself. You can do this in person or via a call. Later send it in writing to your peer.

Estimated time in hours

1

What is the purpose of this assignment?

To learn how to give feedback in person and writing.

How to submit

• Share the link to your written feedback as a comment on this issue
• Share a screenshot of it, too, on this ticket.

[bashirzadehdanial]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mkuRVaJWdaaq7nffKwKE6xdDpX_0Ht2_QqCNFoIAIbg/edit?usp=sharing

[bashirzadehdanial]

[bashirzadehdanial]

Matthew's email is clear, professional, and polite. He effectively explains his request but could enhance it by briefly stating the purpose of the review and suggesting specific time slots to ease scheduling. Acknowledging Shaun’s expertise would add a personal touch, and formatting his contact number as +44 7747 048168 would improve clarity. Overall, it’s an excellent email with minor adjustments to consider.

Here is the link to the email message:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OacXTZyu3VL4xNii1biNgXZc9kzFZex5K-qEKVmgKdQ/edit?tab=t.0

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