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**The 01 Project** is building an open-source ecosystem for AI devices.
-Our flagship operating system can power conversational devices made for the next era of computing, like the Rabbit R1, Humane Pin, or [Star Trek computer](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1ZXugicgn6U).
+Our flagship operating system can power conversational devices like the Rabbit R1, Humane Pin, or [Star Trek computer](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1ZXugicgn6U).
-We are commiting to staying open, modular, and free. We intend to become the GNU/Linux of this space.
+We intend to become the GNU/Linux of this space by staying open, modular, and free.
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-This architecture fuses classical computers with language models; the powerful and deterministic with the flexible and ambiguous. We believe it inherits the best of both— unifying the untapped power of classical computers with the human-like natural usability of language models.
+This architecture fuses **classical computers**— precise, powerful machines— with **language models**— imprecise, intelligent machines.
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+We believe the 01 inherits the best of both, unifying the power and connectivity of classical computers with the natural, human-like usability of language models.
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