From 6c0f1221c1fd9d46e158854ae77e5c51b0e42d49 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: CIakab-NI <127735155+CIakab-NI@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2024 18:18:16 +0300
Subject: [PATCH] Update release-notes/2024-09/README.md

Co-authored-by: vpstoynova <100705307+vpstoynova@users.noreply.github.com>
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 release-notes/2024-09/README.md | 2 +-
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diff --git a/release-notes/2024-09/README.md b/release-notes/2024-09/README.md
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--- a/release-notes/2024-09/README.md
+++ b/release-notes/2024-09/README.md
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ The 2024-09 release for SystemLink Enterprise has been published to <https://dow
     - This privilege is enabled by default for Collaborator, Data Maintainer, and Systems Maintainer built-in roles.
     - For the Automated Agent, the **List published notebooks in SystemLink and download published notebooks into the Jupyter development environment** privilege will be removed, as the Automated Agent should not need to download the notebooks content.
 - Trusted certificates specified at `global.trustedCertificatesSecrets` are now installed on servers that use Jupyter. These certificates are used when calling SystemLink or other external APIs from notebooks.
-- Trusted certificates specified at `global.trustedCertificatesSecrets` are now installed on execution pods, to be used when calling SystemLink or other external APIs from notebooks.
+- Trusted certificates specified at `global.trustedCertificatesSecrets` are now installed on execution pods. These certificates are used when calling SystemLink or other external APIs from the pods.
 - Added abilities to configure the rate-limit values for notebook APIs inside the Helm chart.
 - Notebook Execution Service
     - Created a dedicated swagger page for Artifact APIs.