From d88c241ceb33281bd7e9ac22d75b9507b8bca4c0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Bryann Valderrama Date: Thu, 9 Jan 2025 11:18:52 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] docs: rewrite paragraph --- .../using_openedx_as_LTI_provider.rst | 15 ++++++++------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/source/educators/concepts/advanced_features/using_openedx_as_LTI_provider.rst b/source/educators/concepts/advanced_features/using_openedx_as_LTI_provider.rst index 0439b0ba..c40f5e98 100644 --- a/source/educators/concepts/advanced_features/using_openedx_as_LTI_provider.rst +++ b/source/educators/concepts/advanced_features/using_openedx_as_LTI_provider.rst @@ -16,13 +16,14 @@ Grading Remote Content .. warning:: This feature was a closed pilot experiment. This feature is poorly documented and may not work properly. -When you include the problem components in a graded Open edX subsection in an -external LMS, the Open edX system grades the learner responses to those -problems. The Open edX system then transfers the learner scores back to the -external LMS. This exchange between an external LMS, the Open edX system, and -the external LMS again is near real time. It can take a few moments to complete -this exchange for a single problem component, and up to several minutes to -return aggregated scores of all of the problems in a unit or subsection. +When you include problem components from a graded subsection in your Open edX +instance in an external LMS, your Open edX instance will grade the learner +responses to those problems. Your instance then transfers the learner scores +back to the external LMS. This exchange between an external LMS, your Open edX +instance, and the external LMS again is near real time. It can take a few +moments to complete this exchange for a single problem component, and up to +several minutes to return aggregated scores of all of the problems in a unit or +subsection. When you include Open edX problem components in an external LMS, note the following requirements.