From 83af02b41d85f6cb27f95994bcc598133bd38484 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Alastair Campbell <ac@alastc.com>
Date: Sat, 23 Nov 2024 20:18:04 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] terminology updates

---
 how-to/outcomes/focus-appearance/index.md     | 6 +++---
 how-to/outcomes/focus-appearance/outcome.json | 4 ++--
 how-to/outcomes/text-alternatives/index.md    | 7 ++++---
 3 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/how-to/outcomes/focus-appearance/index.md b/how-to/outcomes/focus-appearance/index.md
index c46ebb1..00f4752 100644
--- a/how-to/outcomes/focus-appearance/index.md
+++ b/how-to/outcomes/focus-appearance/index.md
@@ -4,13 +4,13 @@ layout: outcome.html
 
 ## Goal
 
-Users can see which element has keyboard focus.
+The keyboard focus must have a sufficient visual indicator.
 
 ## Normative Text
 
 <div class="normative">
 
-### Outcome
+### Guideline
 
   <p>{{ outcome.description }}</p>
 
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ Users can see which element has keyboard focus.
 For each focusable item:
 
 1. Is the user-agent default focus indicator used? (Prerequisite)
-    1. Yes, the [user-agent default indicator](methods/default-focus-indicator) is used AND the [accessibility support set] incorporates [Using the default focus indicator and checking contrast](methods/default-focus-indicator-check-contrast) and checking contrast. Stop.
+    1. Yes, the [user-agent default indicator](methods/default-focus-indicator) is used AND the *accessibility support set* incorporates [Using the default focus indicator and checking contrast](methods/default-focus-indicator-check-contrast) and checking contrast. Stop.
     2. No, continue.
 
 
diff --git a/how-to/outcomes/focus-appearance/outcome.json b/how-to/outcomes/focus-appearance/outcome.json
index 996de0c..9c4e4d0 100644
--- a/how-to/outcomes/focus-appearance/outcome.json
+++ b/how-to/outcomes/focus-appearance/outcome.json
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 {
   "index": 0,
-  "title": "Focus Appearance",
-  "description": "Users have a visual indicator for the Keyboard Focus that is sufficient for them."
+  "title": "Keyboard Focus Appearance",
+  "description": "Users can see which element has keyboard focus."
 }
diff --git a/how-to/outcomes/text-alternatives/index.md b/how-to/outcomes/text-alternatives/index.md
index bfb5207..069d412 100644
--- a/how-to/outcomes/text-alternatives/index.md
+++ b/how-to/outcomes/text-alternatives/index.md
@@ -11,13 +11,14 @@ If there is no information conveyed by the image, the user's assistive technolog
 
 <div class="normative">
 
-### Outcome
+### Guideline
 
   <p>{{ outcome.description }}</p>
 
 <div class="nested">
 
-### Requirements decision tree
+### Foundational Requirements
+
 1. Would removing the image impact how people understand the page? (Prerequisite)
    1. No, [decorative images are programmatically hidden](methods/decorative-images). Stop.
    2. Yes, continue.
@@ -32,7 +33,7 @@ If there is no information conveyed by the image, the user's assistive technolog
 
 </div>
 
-### Supplemental
+### Supplimental Requirements
 
 - [The role and importance of images are programmatically indicated](methods/role-of-images) (Supporting requirement).
 - [The type of image (photo, icon, etc.) is indicated](methods/type-of-image)  (Supporting requirement).