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_tabs/Open Source Science.md

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+> The Satellite Needs Working Group Management Office strongly encourages all SNWG Implementation team members take the time to enroll in and complete [NASA's Transform to Open Science (TOPS) OSS 101 course](https://nasa.github.io/Transform-to-Open-Science/).
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 TOPS
 https://nasa.github.io/Transform-to-Open-Science/

_tabs/Part 2: Implementation.md

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 ![](assets/Implementation-Process.png)
 _The Implementation Project Lifecycle_
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 #### Overall Timeline
 - Project Pre-formulation
 - Project Formulation
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-> We strongly encourage all SNWG Implementation team members to take the time to enroll in and complete [NASA's Transform to Open Science (TOPS) OSS 101 course](https://nasa.github.io/Transform-to-Open-Science/).
+> The Satellite Needs Working Group Management Office strongly encourages all SNWG Implementation team members take the time to enroll in and complete [NASA's Transform to Open Science (TOPS) OSS 101 course](https://nasa.github.io/Transform-to-Open-Science/).
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_tabs/What is the SNWG Management Office.md

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-NASA leads a tri-agency assessment (with USGS and NOAA) of federal agency needs submitted through the SNWG survey. The assessment is carried out by more than 100 scientists with expertise on the geophysical observables requested by the agencies. The SNWG Management Office coordinates the assessment process, develops tools used by the assessment participants, schedules and supports follow-up discussions with each participating agency, performs statistical analysis of the survey responses, coordinates the evaluation of solutions proposed to meet agency needs, and drafts NASA’s presentation of selected solutions to the Executive Branch. After each assessment cycle, the SNWG Management Office conducts an extensive lessons learned retrospective, collecting feedback from participants that is used to inform tool refinement and process updates that streamline and support the next assessment cycle.
+## Facilitate the **Assessment** of SNWG Agency Needs
+"NASA leads a tri-agency assessment (with USGS and NOAA) of federal agency needs submitted through the SNWG survey. The assessment is carried out by more than 100 scientists with expertise on the geophysical observables requested by the agencies. The SNWG Management Office coordinates the assessment process, develops tools used by the assessment participants, schedules and supports follow-up discussions with each participating agency, performs statistical analysis of the survey responses, coordinates the evaluation of solutions proposed to meet agency needs, and drafts NASA’s presentation of selected solutions to the Executive Branch. After each assessment cycle, the SNWG Management Office conducts an extensive lessons learned retrospective, collecting feedback from participants that is used to inform tool refinement and process updates that streamline and support the next assessment cycle."
 
-Oversee the Implementation and Operations of SNWG Solutions
-At the heart of the SNWG process is the implementation and delivery of solutions that address the needs of federal agencies. The SNWG Management Office coordinates the status of all SNWG-funded projects at NASA, manages the implementation of solutions from each cycle, and oversees the lifecycle of each science project through operational product release.The SNWG Management office also engages end-users through the SNWG SEP. The ESDS open-source science policy is an important part of the development and implementation effort for all projects managed by the SNWG Management Office. This process will continue for all solutions arising from needs expressed in future SNWG cycles and will follow NASA’s open-source science policies permitting broad access to information on NASA-developed SNWG solutions
+## Oversee the **Implementation** and Operations of SNWG Solutions
+"At the heart of the SNWG process is the implementation and delivery of solutions that address the needs of federal agencies. The SNWG Management Office coordinates the status of all SNWG-funded projects at NASA, manages the implementation of solutions from each cycle, and oversees the lifecycle of each science project through operational product release.The SNWG Management office also engages end-users through the SNWG SEP. The ESDS open-source science policy is an important part of the development and implementation effort for all projects managed by the SNWG Management Office. This process will continue for all solutions arising from needs expressed in future SNWG cycles and will follow NASA’s open-source science policies permitting broad access to information on NASA-developed SNWG solutions"
 
-Provide Training and Community Engagement Around SNWG Solutions
-The SNWG SEP is the key to providing training, outreach, and community engagement around NASA SNWG data products and systems through collaboration across NASA’s Earth Science Division. The program includes polling stakeholders about their training and data needs, connecting with capacity-building efforts within NASA, funding and organizing training activities such as workshops, and bringing together communities of federal and other users around funded solutions. Collaborations among federal users, the scientific community, academia, industry, and NASA’s Earth Science Division empowers these communities to integrate SNWG solutions into their research and decision-making processes.
+## Provide Training and Community **Engagement** Around SNWG Solutions
+"The SNWG SEP is the key to providing training, outreach, and community engagement around NASA SNWG data products and systems through collaboration across NASA’s Earth Science Division. The program includes polling stakeholders about their training and data needs, connecting with capacity-building efforts within NASA, funding and organizing training activities such as workshops, and bringing together communities of federal and other users around funded solutions. Collaborations among federal users, the scientific community, academia, industry, and NASA’s Earth Science Division empowers these communities to integrate SNWG solutions into their research and decision-making processes."
+[The SNWG MO on EarthData ESDS|IMPACT](https://www.earthdata.nasa.gov/esds/impact/snwg)
+
+![](assets/SNWG MO circle.png)
+_The three core components of the SNWG MO._

index.md

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+## Site Purpose
+The focus of this site is on providing a simplified version of information to provide general context of the Project within the SNWG MO and to assist the Project Implementation team in completing their expected tasks.
 
 ## Site Audience
-Solution Project Teams as they progress through the SNWG project lifecycle.
+The intended audience for this site is the Solution Project Team as they progress through the various document developments, decision gates, and reporting requirements of the SNWG project lifecycle.
+
 
-## Site Purpose
-The focus is on providing information to assist the Implementation team in completing their expected actions, without overburdening with in-depth knowledge that may not be necessary to complete tasks.
 
-## SNWG MO Contacts
+## SNWG Implementation Contacts
 
 | Role                               | Name             |
 | :--------------------------------- | :--------------- |