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common-content/en/module/onboarding/application/index.md

@@ -18,4 +18,6 @@ To take this course you must have completed [Intro to Digital](https://itd.codey
 
 You will receive an email within two weeks of completing ITD, inviting you to begin this course as a Learner. All operational details should be linked in this email. If you have not received an email, please tell us at [email protected].
 
-If you have been invited, please now continue...
+Log in to your [Course Portal](https://application-process.codeyourfuture.io/). This the same portal you used to complete ITD. A new set of steps should have appeared. These are the steps to complete ITP.
+
+If you are all signed up and logged in, please now continue...

common-content/en/module/onboarding/goals/index.md

@@ -32,24 +32,24 @@ To complete the module, you will need to demonstrate you have learnt these skill
 
 #### Version control
 
-You will have tracked changes to data (your code) over time with Git and GitHub. Your goal is to build a mental model of Git "trees" and begin learning ways to travel through files using the "time machine" of Git.
+_By the end of this module_ you will have tracked changes to data (your code) over time with Git and GitHub. Your goal is to build a mental model of Git "trees" and begin learning ways to travel through files using the "time machine" of Git.
 
 #### Requirements and Testing
 
-You will have tested your work using acceptance criteria, manual testing, and automated testing. Your goal is to interpret requirements and write code to meet acceptance criteria.
+_By the end of this module_ , you will have tested your work using acceptance criteria, manual testing, and automated testing. Your goal is to interpret requirements and write code to meet acceptance criteria.
 
 #### Code review
 
-You will have revised, refactored, and reviewed code using code review. Your goal is to form the habits of a professional who can think, talk, and write in a technical context.
+_By the end of this module_ you will have revised, refactored, and reviewed code using code review. Your goal is to form the habits of a professional who can think, talk, and write in a technical context.
 
 #### Data
 
-You will have manipulated data with HTML, Git, and Google Sheets. Your goal is to begin to understand how data is structured and how to manipulate it.
+_By the end of this module_ you will have manipulated data with HTML, Git, and Google Sheets. Your goal is to begin to understand how data is structured and how to manipulate it.
 
 #### Scientific method
 
-You will have written and asked well-structured developer questions. Your goal is to build a strategy to methodically solve problems.
+_By the end of this module_ you will have written and asked well-structured developer questions. Your goal is to build a strategy to methodically solve problems.
 
 #### Enrollment
 
-You will have enrolled as a Trainee. Your goal is to complete the onboarding process and enroll as a Trainee.
+_By the end of this module_ you will have enrolled as a Trainee. Your goal is to complete the onboarding process and enroll as a Trainee.

org-cyf-itp/content/onboarding/_index.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 +++
 title = 'Onboarding'
-description = 'Evaluate and fix code with Lighthouse; use version control with Git and GitHub; Evaluate your learning style and set goals; Enroll as a Trainee'
+description = 'Evaluate and fix code with Lighthouse; use version control with Git and GitHub; Plan your study and set goals; Enroll as a Trainee'
 layout = 'module'
 emoji= '🫱🏾‍🫲🏿'
 menu = ['syllabus', 'course schedule']

org-cyf-itp/content/onboarding/success/index.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 +++
 title = 'success'
-description = 'How do we know we have completed User Focused Data?'
+description = 'How do we know we have completed Onboarding?'
 layout = 'success'
 emoji= '✅'
 menu_level = ['module']
@@ -10,6 +10,8 @@ weight = 11
 2="Link to your PR for [Form Controls](https://github.com/CodeYourFuture/Module-User-Focused-Data/issues/88)"
 +++
 
+> 🎯 Complete onboarding and [enroll as a Trainee](https://forms.gle/vRuofa7aeL5DsbhGA)
+
 ### 🎯 You've achieved your learning objectives if you can:
 
 ```objectives
@@ -32,4 +34,5 @@ weight = 11
 1. Make a new issue on your own Coursework Planner.
 1. Link to the two Pull Requests on your issue. You don't have to wait for your PRs to be reviewed, but you must have made them.
 1. Submit the issue link to step 1 of ITP on [CYF Course Portal](https://application-process.codeyourfuture.io/)
+1. [Enroll as a Trainee](https://forms.gle/vRuofa7aeL5DsbhGA)
 1. Here are those PRs again: