respond to comments about primary page

app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/age-groups-and-specialisms/_categories.html.erb

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
             )) %>
             <%= render Categories::CardComponent.new(heading_tag: "h2", card:
             OpenStruct.new(
-              title: "Age groups you could teach",
+              title: "Become a primary school teacher",
               description: "Find out about teaching in primary school (ages 4-11).",
               path: "/life-as-a-teacher/age-groups-and-specialisms/primary",
             )) %>

app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/age-groups-and-specialisms/primary.md

@@ -3,16 +3,17 @@ title: Become a primary school teacher
 subject: primary
 title_paragraph: |-
   <p>
- As a primary school teacher, you'll have the opportunity to foster a love of learning in pupils from the very beginning. You'll create a supportive and vibrant classroom environment where pupils can experience the joy of learning.</p>
+   As a primary school teacher, you'll have the opportunity to foster a love of learning in pupils from the very beginning. You'll create a supportive and vibrant classroom environment where pupils can experience the joy of learning.</p>
+
 description: |-
-    Find out how to become a primary school teacher, including what you'll teach and if it is the right career for you.
+   Find out how to become a primary school teacher, including what you'll teach and if it is the right career for you.
 layout: "layouts/minimal"
 colour: pastel yellow-yellow
 image: "static/images/content/hero-images/0011.jpg"
 keywords:
-  - primary school
-  - primary school teacher
-  - primary school teacher training
+- primary school
+- primary school teacher
+- primary school teacher training
 
 content:
   - "content/shared/subject-pages/header"

app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/age-groups-and-specialisms/primary/_article.html.erb

@@ -14,11 +14,12 @@
   </section>
 
   <section class="col col-720 col-space-l-top">
-    <h2 class="heading--box-blue">What you'll teach</h2>
-   <p>Pupils start primary school in England when they are 4 and leave when they are 11 years old. They will usually be taught by one teacher who will be responsible for a class for the year.</p>
+    <h2 class="heading--box-blue">What you'll teach at each age group</h2>
+   <p>Pupils usually start primary school in England when they are 4 to 5 and leave when they are 11 years old. However, some pupils could start when they are 3 years old if there is a nursery attached to the school.</p> 
+    <p><a href="/life-as-a-teacher/age-groups-and-specialisms/early-years-teachers">Find out more about teaching pupils before the age of 5.</a></p>
    <p>Primary school is split into groups of years. The first year is known as reception and is part of the early years foundation stage (EYFS). There are then two other groups of years known as key stages. In primary school the key stages are  key stage 1 (KS1) and key stage 2 (KS2).</p>
    <h3>Reception</h3>
-   <p>Reception is the last year of EYFS and the first year of primary school with pupils aged 4 years old. Reception is an exciting time for pupils and parents as it is the first time pupils will be part of a formal school setting and will begin learning key skills such as reading. At this age, pupils will be taught through play and games.</p>
+   <p>Reception is the last year of EYFS and the first year of primary school with pupils aged 4 to 5 years old. Reception is an exciting time for pupils and parents as it is the first time pupils will be part of a formal school setting and will begin learning key skills such as reading. At this age, pupils will be taught through play and games.</p>
    <p>The areas of learning pupils will cover in recpetion include:</p>
    <ul>
     <li>communication and language</li>