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diff --git a/docs/overviews/overview-advertisers.md b/docs/overviews/overview-advertisers.md
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ banner_title: UID2 Overview for Advertisers
 banner_description: Upgrade campaign activation with Unified ID 2.0.
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-Advertisers can upgrade their first-party data tactics with Unified ID 2.0 to deliver omnichannel campaigns across devices with one identifier.
+As an advertiser, you can upgrade your first-party data tactics with Unified ID 2.0 to deliver omnichannel campaigns across devices with one identifier.
 
 The following sections provide information about benefits, workflow, documentation, and other resources for advertisers adopting UID2.
 

diff --git a/docs/overviews/overview-data-providers.md b/docs/overviews/overview-data-providers.md
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ banner_title: UID2 Overview for Data Providers
 banner_description: An identity solution for the future.
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-Data and measurement providers can reduce identity fragmentation by adopting Unified ID 2.0 to connect data with a more durable, omnichannel and cross-device identifier to fulfill their customer use cases.
+As a data and measurement provider, you can reduce identity fragmentation by adopting Unified ID 2.0 to connect data with a more durable, omnichannel and cross-device identifier to fulfill your customer use cases.
 
 The following sections provide information on the benefits, workflow, documentation, and other resources for data providers adopting UID2.
 

diff --git a/docs/overviews/overview-dsps.md b/docs/overviews/overview-dsps.md
@@ -8,9 +8,9 @@ banner_title: UID2 Overview for DSPs
 banner_description: Enable data strategies with a more durable identifier.
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-This page provides information about what the Unified ID 2.0 (UID2) framework offers to demand-side platforms (DSPs), workflow, documentation and other resources, and how to get started.
+The Unified ID 2.0 (UID2) framework offers many advantages to demand-side platforms (DSPs).
 
-The following sections provide information about benefits, workflow, documentation, and other resources for DSPs adopting UID2.
+The following sections provide information about benefits, workflow, documentation, and other resources for DSPs adopting UID2, as well as instructions for getting started.
 
 ## Audience
 

diff --git a/docs/overviews/overview-publishers.md b/docs/overviews/overview-publishers.md
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ banner_title: UID2 Overview for Publishers
 banner_description: Maintain audience targeting in the ever-changing advertising industry for better impression monetization and more relevance.
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-Publishers can benefit from the cross-device presence of Unified ID 2.0 and take advantage of a consistent identity fabric on all of their inventory.
+As a publisher, you can benefit from the cross-device presence of Unified ID 2.0 and take advantage of a consistent identity fabric on all your inventory.
 
 The following sections provide information about benefits, workflow, documentation, and other resources for publishers adopting UID2.