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5_Privacy_Respecting_Software.md

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 # Privacy & Security-Focused Software and Services
-> A curated list of privacy-respecting apps, software, and providers 🔐
+A curated list of privacy-respecting apps, software, and providers 🔐
 
 **Too long? 🦒** See the [TLDR version](/2_TLDR_Short_List.md#open-source-privacy-focused-software) instead.
 
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 ## Intro
 
-Migrating to encrypted, privacy-respecting open source software and services can greatly 
-help protect your privacy, and improve your digital security.
-Choosing open-source applications with a strong emphasis on security will help stop large
-corporations, governments, and hackers from logging, storing or selling your personal details.
+Large data-hungry corporations dominate the digital world but with little, or no respect for your privacy.
+Migrating to open-source applications with a strong emphasis on security will help stop
+corporations, governments, and hackers from logging, storing or selling your personal data.
+
+Be aware that no software is perfect- there will always be bugs and vulnerabilities. Also, applications can only as secure as the system they are running on. You keep your system up-to-date and [follow good security practices](https://github.com/Lissy93/personal-security-checklist).
 
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