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Merge pull request #153 from TheAloofPotato/patch-1
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Grammar fix on some dialogues in script-topics.rpy
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monikLover authored Nov 13, 2017
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Expand Up @@ -705,7 +705,7 @@ label monika_lastpoem:
m "Hey, you remember that last poem I showed you?"
m "I mean, the one right before Yuri killed herself, with all the messed-up colors and stuff."
m "That was actually a little more of an experiment than a poem, you could say."
m "I was experimenting with different ways I could modify the game, and run code, and things like that..."
m "I was experimenting with different ways I could modify the game, and run the code, and things like that..."
m "It almost seemed like with enough effort, I'd be able to escape from the confines of the game entirely."
m "Sadly, I didn't really know what I was doing, so I messed the whole thing up..."
m "And I'd keep trying, but I doubt you'd want to deal with me doing that."
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m "If someone really inspires you to improve yourself, they're your hero."
m "There are all sorts of great people out there in the world."
m "I hope someone will consider you their hero someday!"
m "You don't have to fight in a war or anything. You just have try to help people out, you know?"
m "You don't have to fight in a war or anything. You just have to try to help people out, you know?"
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init 5 python:
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m "Humans have created quite a few problems for Earth. Like global warming and pollution."
m "Some of those problems are because of cities."
m "When people convert land for urban use, those changes are permanent..."
m "It's not all that surprising, when you put some thought into it. More humans means more waste and carbon emission."
m "It's not all that surprising, when you put some thought into it. More humans mean more waste and carbon emission."
m "And even though global populations aren't growing like they used to, cities are still getting bigger."
m "Then again, if people live close together, that leaves more room for open wilderness."
m "Maybe it's not as simple as it seems."
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