Docs review andreas

get-started/high-level-content.md

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 title: High-level content
 summary: Recommended articles to gain an understanding of the key concepts and technologies used within the Particular Service Platform
-reviewed: 2022-03-18
+reviewed: 2024-11-06
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 These articles are recommended to gain an understanding of the key concepts and technologies used within the Particular Service Platform.

monitoring/custom-checks/in-servicepulse.md

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 title: Managing custom checks in ServicePulse
 summary: Describes how ServicePulse monitors custom check activity
-reviewed: 2022-03-11
+reviewed: 2024-11-06
 redirects:
   - servicepulse/intro-endpoints-custom-checks
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@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ When a custom check fails, it will continue to make the main Custom Checks badge
 
 Sometimes a custom check reports an error that is easily solved. The status of the custom check will not be updated in ServicePulse until the custom check is executed again.
 
-If it is a one-off custom check, then the endpoint hosting it will need to be restarted to execute the custom check again. If it is a periodic custom check, then it will be automatically executed again after the scheduled period.
+If it is a one-off custom check, the endpoint hosting the check will need to be restarted to execute it again. If it is a periodic custom check, it will be automatically executed again after the scheduled period.
 
 Rather than waiting for the failing custom check to be executed again to update its status, it can be muted. Muted custom checks are removed from ServicePulse and will not contribute to the main custom checks dashboard badge.
 

platform/platform-sample-package.md

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 title: Platform Sample installation
 summary: Installation instructions for using the platform sample for demo purposes.
 component: PlatformSample
-reviewed: 2022-03-11
+reviewed: 2024-11-06
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 The [Platform Sample package](https://www.nuget.org/packages/Particular.PlatformSample) is a portable version of the Particular Service Platform which can be used to demonstrate the platform without installing it. This is the easiest way to experience the Particular Service Platform.
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 ### Showing console output
 
-By default, console output from ServiceControl and ServiceControl.Monitoring is suppressed. For debugging or curiosity, console output may be shown by specifying:
+By default, the console output from ServiceControl and ServiceControl.Monitoring is suppressed. For debugging or curiosity, console output may be shown by specifying:
 
 snippet: ShowConsoleOutput
 
@@ -55,4 +55,4 @@ The [message replay tutorial](/tutorials/message-replay) is a sample that uses t
 To use ServiceInsight with the sample, [download](https://github.com/Particular/serviceinsight/releases/latest) and install ServiceInsight. After starting ServiceInsight, connect to ServiceControl using the [Endpoint Explorer](/serviceinsight/#endpoint-explorer) at, for example, `http://localhost:49200/api`.
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> The Platform Sample package will search for available ports and then display the ports being used. The actual ServiceControl port that needs to be used in the Endpoint Explorer can be seen in the output.
+> The Platform Sample package will search for available ports and then display the ports being used. The actual ServiceControl port that needs to be used in the Endpoint Explorer can be seen in the output.

transports/sql/deployment-options.md

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 title: Deployment options
-reviewed: 2022-02-28
+reviewed: 2024-11-06
 component: SqlTransport
 related:
  - nservicebus/operations