doc: visualize metrics using grafana: upload.md updates

user-metrics/tutorial - visualize_metrics_using_grafana/Service.md

@@ -1,19 +1,19 @@
 # 2: Create a service
 
-The make command in the preceding section also creates a service specification file (metrics-service.yml) in the user-metrics directory. When you execute a CREATE SERVICE statement to create the service, you include the contents of this file inline in that statement.
+The `make` command in the preceding section also creates a service specification file (`metrics-service.yml`) in the user-metrics directory. When you execute a `CREATE SERVICE` statement to create the service, you can include the contents of this file inline in that statement.
 
-1. To create the service, execute the following CREATE SERVICE command using SnowSQL CLI or Snowsight web interface. Make sure you use the test_role to execute the CREATE SERVICE command.
+1. To create the service, execute the following `CREATE SERVICE` command using SnowSQL CLI or Snowsight web interface. Make sure you use the `test_role` to execute the `CREATE SERVICE` command.
 
-```commandline
-CREATE SERVICE metrics_visualizer
-  IN COMPUTE POOL tutorial_compute_pool
-  FROM SPECIFICATION $$
-    <copy/paste the specification from metrics-service.yml file>
-  $$;
-```
+```sql
+    CREATE SERVICE metrics_visualizer
+      IN COMPUTE POOL tutorial_compute_pool
+      FROM SPECIFICATION $$
+        <copy/paste the specification from metrics-service.yml file>
+      $$;
+    ```
 
-2. Call the SYSTEM$GET_SERVICE_STATUS function to verify that all of the service containers are running.
+2. Run `SHOW SERVICE CONTAINERS IN SERVICE` statement to verify that all of the service containers are running.
 
-```commandline
-call SYSTEM$GET_SERVICE_STATUS('metrics_visualizer');
-```
+    ```sql
+    SHOW SERVICE CONTAINERS IN SERVICE metrics_visualizer;
+    ```

user-metrics/tutorial - visualize_metrics_using_grafana/Upload.md

@@ -16,9 +16,9 @@ git clone https://github.com/Snowflake-Labs/spcs-templates.git
 docker login <registry_hostname> -u <username>
 ```
 Note the following:
-* The <registry_hostname> is the hostname part of the repository URL. For example, myorg-myacct.registry.snowflakecomputing.com.
+* The `<registry_hostname>` is the hostname part of the repository URL. For example, myorg-myacct.registry.snowflakecomputing.com.
 
- * <username> is your Snowflake username. Docker will prompt you for your password.
+ * `<username>` is your Snowflake username. Docker will prompt you for your password.
 
 6. Use one of the following options to upload images to your image repository:
     * Option 1: The easiest option is to upload the pre-built [Docker images](https://hub.docker.com/u/snowflakedb) that Snowflake provides on dockerhub.
@@ -29,7 +29,15 @@ Note the following:
     ```commandline
     make build-all SNOW_REPO=<repository-url>
     ```
-7. Call the SYSTEM$REGISTRY_LIST_IMAGES function to verify that the images are present in the repository.
-```commandline
-SELECT SYSTEM$REGISTRY_LIST_IMAGES('/tutorial_db/data_schema/tutorial_repository');
-```
+7. Run the `SHOW IMAGES IN IMAGE REPOSITORY` statement to verify that the images are present in the repository.
+
+    ```commandline
+    SHOW IMAGES IN IMAGE REPOSITORY tutorial_db.data_schema.tutorial_repository;
+    ```
+
+    The repository should contain four images:
+
+    - `grafana`
+    - `mdservice`
+    - `otel-prometheus`
+    - `prometheus`