fine tuned: ambient light level, PWM signal, LED dimming curve, readme

README.md

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 # Sensor Light
 
-A smart light bar — illuminates dark places on-demand by gently dimming up/down a LED stripe depending on the ambient light level and a detected human presence.
+_A smart light bar — illuminates dark places on-demand by gently dimming up/down a LED stripe depending on the ambient light level and a detected human presence._
 
-This automatic light is completely self-contained – just needs 12V power supply.
+This automatic light is completely self-contained – just needs a suitable 12V power supply.
 
-An advanced but quite cheap presence sensor is used here, which works to my satisfaction. The circuit and software is designed to save power where possible. 
-An ESP32-H2 SoC low power processor serves for the logic. It is connected to a VEML7700 ambient light sensor and the mentioned small but effective LD2410 radar based presence sensor.
+An advanced (and quite cheap) presence sensor is used here, which works to my satisfaction. However, it should be fine-tuned using the manufacturers app at the final location to get the best out of it.
 
-It does NOT need nor use any Wifi / Zigbee / Matter features of the ESP32-H2 SoC. One may feel free to add a Smart Home connector on his own.
+The circuit and software is designed to save power where possible.  
+An ESP32-H2 SoC low power processor serves for the logic. It is connected to a VEML7700 ambient light sensor and the mentioned small but effective LD2410 radar based presence sensor.
 
-_Status: Hardware and Software is feature complete, tested and ready to Roll 'n' Roll._
+It does NOT need nor use any Wifi / Zigbee / Matter features of the ESP32-H2 SoC. One may feel free to add some sort of Smart Home connector on his own.
 
-<a>
-    <img src="hardware/pictures/light_bar_final.png" alt="Light bar sketch" width="600">
-</a>
+__Status: Hardware and Software is feature complete, tested and ready to Roll 'n' Roll.__
 
+---
 ## Hardware
-
-<a>
-    <table style="border-style: none">
-        <tr>
-            <th><img src="./hardware/pictures/esp32h2.png" alt="drawing" width="300"/></th>
-            <th><img src="./hardware/pictures/main_board_complete.png" alt="drawing" width="600"></th>
-        </tr>
-    </table>
-</a>
-
 ### Wiring diagram
 <a>
     <source media="(prefers-color-scheme: dark)" srcset="hardware/wiring_diagram_dark.svg">
@@ -41,27 +30,30 @@ Please note:
 
 ### Parts 
 
-#### LED Bar parts
-- ESP32-H2-WROOM-03  (the 2MB flash model is sufficient)
+#### LED bar 
+
+_Designed for 12V and (up to) 35W LED Stripe._
+
+- ESP32-H2-WROOM-03 _(the 2MB flash model is sufficient)_
 - VEML7700 Ambient Light Sensor
 - HLK-LD2410 Radar presence sensor (2x)
 - BC337-40 TO92 NPN Transistor (2x)
 - BC327-40 TO92 PNP Transistor
 - IRLB8721PbF N-Channel MOSFET (TO-220)
-- Resistor 1 kΩ
-- Resistor 10 kΩ (2x)
-- Resistor 4.7 kΩ
-- Capacitor 0.1 µF (2x)
-- Capacitor 1.0 µF
+- Resistor 1kΩ
+- Resistor 10kΩ (2x)
+- Resistor 4.7kΩ
+- Capacitor 0.1µF (2x)
+- Capacitor 10µF
 - 3.3V LDO voltage regulator LD1117V33 (SOT-223)
 - Diode (any, working at 3.3 V and 150mA max.)
-- 5m LED Stripe
+- 5m LED Stripe (12V, 3000-3200k, COB, 8mm wide, power: 5-7 W/m)
 - 12V DC Connector
-- 12V Power Supply
+- 12V, 5A Power Supply _(look for a good one to avoid flickering)_
 - Wiring Board
 - 4 Pin Connector Mini Socket
 - Cables
-- 5m LED Housing
+- LED Housing (5m)
 
 #### USB Flash Adapter
 - USB-C Plug Female
@@ -88,15 +80,24 @@ After connecting the ESP32-H2 via a flash adapter to a USB computer port:
 - `cargo run --release`  _(flashes the chip)_
 - `espflash monitor` _(optional – see ESP32 console output)_ 
 
-## References
+## Prototype pictures
 
-- [Transistors](http://stefanfrings.de/transistoren/index.html)
-- [Switching with transistors](https://dl6gl.de/schalten-mit-transistoren.html)
-- [The Rust on ESP Book - Setting Up a Development Environment](https://esp-rs.github.io/book/installation/index.html)
+<a>
+    <img src="hardware/pictures/light_bar_final.png" alt="Light bar sketch" width="600">
+</a>
 
+<a>
+    <table style="border-style: none">
+        <tr>
+            <th><img src="./hardware/pictures/esp32h2.png" alt="drawing" width="300"/></th>
+            <th><img src="./hardware/pictures/main_board_complete.png" alt="drawing" width="600"></th>
+        </tr>
+    </table>
+</a>
 
 ## Terms & Conditions
-Feel free to use anything here for learning, building your own version or make a product out of it and sell it.
+
+Feel free to use anything here for learning, building your own version or make a product out of it and sell it.  
 Have fun!
 
 Pull requests are welcome.
@@ -105,4 +106,4 @@ _bitmagier, September 2024_
 
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+_In case you find this work useful and like to support me, I would appreciate a donation in [Solana](https://solana.com/) to: [`FTMfeKYhpVAouuwXjpJXhnT13fkeNJqQsRGMBxBo1GML`](./hardware/pictures/solana_wallet.png)_