Merge pull request #2191 from breatheco-de/marcogonzalo-patch-3

Update making-an-amazing-resume.md

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 title: "Making an amazing resume"
-subtitle: "The Art of getting interviews its 60% about the resume, let's make it shine!"
+subtitle: "The Art of getting interviews is 60% about the resume, let's make it shine!"
 textColor: "white"
 date: "2020-10-19T16:36:31+00:00"
 tags: ["career support"]
 status: "published"
 
 ---
 
-Below is an example of a great resume for you first coding job, during this article we go over each part of the document with explanations and examples:
+Below is an example of a great resume for your first coding job, during this article, we go over each part of the document with explanations and examples:
 
 ![Image Resume](https://github.com/breatheco-de/content/blob/master/src/assets/images/resume2.png?raw=true)
 
 ## Employment History
 
 - [ ] Do not add more than three past work experiences, unless they are really relevant or related to coding.
 - [ ] You need software development experience.
-- [ ] If you don't have coding experience: Start an internship (paid or unpaid) at coding job in a great company or start/join a freelance project.
+- [ ] If you don't have coding experience: Start an internship (paid or unpaid) at a coding job in a great company or start/join a freelance project.
 
-### Why starting an internship or freelance project?
+### Why start an internship or freelance project?
 
-Previous experience makes everything, you need to be able to add some into your resume to look better, and this is an example of how your freelance job could look like:
+Previous experience makes everything, you need to be able to add some to your resume to look better, and this is an example of what your freelance job could look like:
 
 ```txt
 Title: 
 Freelance Web Developer at MyCompany Media
 
 Description:
-Responsible for designing, coding and modifying React applications and Python APIs from layout/mockups/wireframes to functional and according to a client's specifications. Strive to create visually appealing sites that feature user-friendly design and clear navigation.
+Responsible for designing, coding, and modifying React applications and Python APIs from layout/mockups/wireframes to functional and according to a client's specifications. Strive to create visually appealing sites that feature user-friendly design and clear navigation.
 ```
 
-> :point_up:  DO NOT COPY AND PASTE, please customize it, use different words, different technologies and programming languages that you like, you can talk about eCommerce apps, edTech, you can mention particular industries that you like.
+> :point_up:  DO NOT COPY AND PASTE, please customize it, use different words, different technologies, and programming languages that you like, you can talk about eCommerce apps, and edTech, and you can mention particular industries that you like.
 
 If your final project was a game, you can say you are specialized in building games with HTML/CSS/Javascript/Python.
-If it was a social network than you are specialized in building "social apps", etc.
+If it was a social network then you are specialized in building "social apps", etc.
 If it was a tutoring site, you can say you are focused on edTech.
 
 ## Education
@@ -44,42 +44,47 @@ If it was a tutoring site, you can say you are focused on edTech.
 ## Certificate
 
 - [ ] Add any marketing or design certificates (because those are relevant to coding), do not add irrelevant certificates like Bartender or Event Planner.
-- [ ] If you are certified on relevant software apps design or business apps like Photoshop, SAP, Microsoft Dynamics, etc.
+- [ ] If you are certified in relevant software app design or business apps like Photoshop, SAP, Microsoft Dynamics, etc.
 
 ## Projects 
 
-- [ ] The projects you publish must be good quality, **do not publish**: A simple todo list, a random card generator, tic-tac-toe, etc. None of that is impressive.
+- [ ] The projects you publish must be good quality, **do not publish**: A simple to-do list, a random card generator, tic-tac-toe, etc. None of that is impressive.
 
 ### Enhance previous projects:
 
 Enhanced versions of some of the projects you built at the academy, for example:
 
-- Starwars Reading List: You can make this a social reading club, everyone has a password and shares they favorites.
-- Contact List: Make the contact list a CRM, basically you add a "status" to each contact and then the sale people can change the contact status based on the sale process.
-- Todo List: Todos don't need to have just two status: Done or Not done, you can make them have several like: Not doing, Doing, Done, Approved, Rejected, etc. That will make your todo list a project management tool with stages.
+Star Wars Reading List: You can make this a social reading club, everyone has a password and shares their favorite.
+- Contact List: Make the contact list a CRM, basically you add a "status" to each contact, and then the salespeople can change the contact status based on the sale process.
+- Todo List: Todos don't need to have just two statuses: Done or Not done, you can make them have several like Not doing, Doing, Done, Approved, Rejected, etc. That will make your to-do list a project management tool with stages.
 
 Each of your projects must have:
 - Live link
 - Readme description with screenshots.
 - Organized code.
 
-> :point_up:  Quality is more important than quantity, just two or three projects in enough if they are really good.
+> :point_up:  Quality is more important than quantity, just two or three projects are enough if they are really good.
 
 ## The Skills
 
-These are the most important most wanted technologies:
+These are the most important most wanted technologies for Full-Stack:
 
 ```txt
-HTML5/CSS3, Bootstrap, Javascript ECMAScript 2020, Node.js, GIT/Github, Python, Flask, API's, React.js, Flux, SCRUM, SQL, SQLAlchemy, MySQL, Postgress API's
+HTML5/CSS3, Bootstrap, Javascript ECMAScript 2020, DOM, GIT/Github, Python, Flask, APIs, React.js, Flux, SCRUM, SQL, SQLAlchemy, MySQL, Postgres
 ```
 
-You also learned these secondary technologies that my be use-full depending on what company you are applying to:
+and for Data Science:
+```txt
+Python, Numpy, Pandas, Matplotlib, Data Science, Machine Learning, Exploratory data analysis (EDA), Webscraping
+```
+
+You also learned these secondary technologies that may be useful depending on what company you are applying to:
 
 ```txt
-Heroku, Markdown, Use Stories, Data-Structures, Data-Modeling, REST, MVC, Event oriented programing, The DOM.
+Deploying, Markdown, User Stories, Data-Structures, Data-Modeling, REST, MVC.
 ```
 
-Additionally these are good technologies that we don't teach during the 16 weeks but will be easy to learn and add a lot of value to your resume:
+Additionally, these are good technologies that we don't teach during the 16 weeks but will be easy to learn and add a lot of value to your resume:
 
 ```txt
 Unit testing, jQuery, Gatsby.js, SSR, AWS, Firbase, WordPress, React Native.
@@ -88,5 +93,5 @@ Unit testing, jQuery, Gatsby.js, SSR, AWS, Firbase, WordPress, React Native.
 
 ## Additional resources:
 
-- Create your resume online, for free: [FlowCV.com](https://flowcv.io/)
+- Create your resume online, for free: [FlowCV.com](https://flowcv.io/) or [EnhanCV.com](https://enhancv.com/)
 - Amazing resume tips: [FullStackResume.com](https://www.fullstackresume.com/)