Improved intro paragraph copy issue #65

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-	<p> This is a pretend article about vegetables. Specifically how long they are and what color they are. There are lots of vegetables in the world and they are of various collllors. They can be white, blue or yellow; but there are no neon vegetables in nature. That is why this article is so important to inform you about types of vegggetables. Once you're done reading, you should be able to identify whether or not what you're eating is a vegetable. </p>
+	<p> This article will explain to an alien some of the properties of vegetables, which are a type of food that humans eat.  Specifically, it will help an alien understand what vegetables look like. On planet earth, there are lots of vegetables and they can come in various lengths and lots of colors, such as white, blue, and yellow. However, there are no neon vegetables. That is why this article is so important to inform aliens what vegetables are. Once you are finished reading, you should be able to identify whether or not what you are eating is a vegetable. </p>
 
 
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