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Style updates for etc., YouTube, em-dash #4

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10 changes: 5 additions & 5 deletions source/intro.rst
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Since "go" is such a common English word, it is completely useless as a search
term when googling. Instead search for "golang". It is standard practice in
the community that all Go-related blog posts, Github repos, tweets, job
postings, etc be tagged with "golang".
the community that all Go-related blog posts, GitHub repos, tweets, job
postings, etc., be tagged with "golang".
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Use of a period after "etc" is a stylistic matter of some contention. In the English dialects I speak - Rustbelt American and Silicon Valley American - as well as in standard British usage, the period is considered superfluous.

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Who's Using Go?
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Home of the Go authors and core team, signifiant parts of the Google
infrastructure are thought to be written in Go. The company however does not
publicly disclose which Google services are written in which languages.
Youtube is known to be powered by Vitess_, an open source, massively scalable
YouTube is known to be powered by Vitess_, an open source, massively scalable
database multiplexing layer written in Go.

Heroku
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Command line examples were written on an `Ubuntu`_ 12.10 desktop environment.
Everything we do in this book can also be done on other flavors of Linux, on Mac
OSX - probably even on Windows.
OSXprobably even on Windows.
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Not a fan of the em-dash in plain text files. Also not a fan of removing the spaces - it makes the sentence harder to read.

Please remove this change.


In addition to Go language basics, this book also covers cloud_ deployment and
`continuous integration`_ tools & techniques popular in the Go community. You
`continuous integration`_ tools and techniques popular in the Go community. You
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I prefer the ampersand.

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