solution #1774
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Thank you for your hard work on this project! While your code is mostly on the right track, there are a few critical issues that need to be addressed before we can approve the pull request:
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Incorrect Area Calculation in
CircleClass: The formula for calculating the area of a circle is incorrect. Please update it toMath.PI * Math.pow(radius, 2)to ensure accurate calculations. -
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toStringMethod inIsoscelesTrapezoidClass: ThetoStringmethod currently labels the figure as a "right triangle" instead of "isosceles trapezoid". Please correct this to accurately reflect the figure type. -
Constructor Parameter Naming in
IsoscelesTrapezoidClass: The parametersideis misleading as it is used to set theheight. Consider renaming it toheightfor better clarity. -
Missing
draw()Method: The task specifies that figures should have adraw()method to print out all information about the figure. This method is currently missing and needs to be implemented.
Once these issues are resolved, your code will be in great shape! Keep up the good work, and feel free to reach out if you have any questions or need further assistance. 😊
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| public double calculateArea() { | ||
| return 2 * Math.pow(radius, 2) * Math.PI; |
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The formula for calculating the area of a circle is incorrect. It should be Math.PI * Math.pow(radius, 2) instead of 2 * Math.pow(radius, 2) * Math.PI. Please correct this to ensure the area is calculated properly.
| public IsoscelesTrapezoid(Color color, double top, double bottom, double side) { | ||
| super(color); | ||
| this.top = top; | ||
| this.bottom = bottom; | ||
| this.height = side; |
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The constructor parameter side is misleading as it is used to set the height. Consider renaming it to height for clarity.
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| @Override | ||
| public String toString() { | ||
| return "Figure: right triangle" |
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The toString method incorrectly describes the figure as a 'right triangle'. It should be 'isosceles trapezoid'. Please update the description to accurately reflect the figure type.
| case SQUARE -> new Square(color, RANDOM.nextDouble()); | ||
| case RECTANGLE -> new Rectangle(color, RANDOM.nextDouble(), RANDOM.nextDouble()); | ||
| case RIGHT_TRIANGLE -> new RightTriangle(color, RANDOM.nextDouble(), RANDOM.nextDouble()); | ||
| case CIRCLE -> new Circle(color, RANDOM.nextDouble()); | ||
| default -> new IsoscelesTrapezoid(color, RANDOM.nextDouble(), RANDOM.nextDouble(), RANDOM.nextDouble()); |
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The RANDOM.nextDouble() method generates a random double between 0.0 and 1.0. If you want to have a more meaningful range for the dimensions of the figures, consider scaling the random values by a factor or using a different method to generate them.
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Thank you for your submission! 🎉 Your code is on the right track, but there are a few critical issues that need attention to ensure full functionality:
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Circle Area Calculation: The formula for calculating the area of a circle is incorrect. Please update it to
Math.PI * Math.pow(radius, 2)for accurate results. -
IsoscelesTrapezoid
toStringMethod: ThetoStringmethod currently labels the figure as a "right triangle" instead of "isosceles trapezoid". Please correct this to reflect the correct figure type. -
IsoscelesTrapezoid Constructor Parameter: The parameter
sideis misleading as it is used to set theheight. Consider renaming it toheightfor better clarity. -
Random Dimensions Constraints: The random dimensions for figures are not constrained, which might lead to impractically small or large figures. Adding constraints to these values will improve usability.
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Missing
draw()Method: Ensure that each figure class implements adraw()method to print out all information about the figure, as specified by the task.
These changes will not only improve the accuracy and clarity of your code but also enhance its usability. Keep up the good work, and continue learning from these experiences! 💪
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| public double calculateArea() { | ||
| return 2 * Math.pow(radius, 2) * Math.PI; |
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The formula for calculating the area of a circle is incorrect. It should be Math.PI * Math.pow(radius, 2) instead of 2 * Math.pow(radius, 2) * Math.PI. Please update this to ensure accurate area calculations.
| private double bottom; | ||
| private double height; | ||
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| public IsoscelesTrapezoid(Color color, double top, double bottom, double side) { |
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The constructor parameter side is misleading as it is used to set the height. Consider renaming it to height for better clarity.
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| @Override | ||
| public String toString() { | ||
| return "Figure: right triangle" |
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The toString method incorrectly labels the figure as a 'right triangle'. It should be 'isosceles trapezoid' to accurately reflect the figure type.
| case SQUARE -> new Square(color, RANDOM.nextDouble()); | ||
| case RECTANGLE -> new Rectangle( | ||
| color, | ||
| RANDOM.nextDouble(), | ||
| RANDOM.nextDouble() | ||
| ); | ||
| case RIGHT_TRIANGLE -> new RightTriangle( | ||
| color, | ||
| RANDOM.nextDouble(), | ||
| RANDOM.nextDouble() | ||
| ); | ||
| case CIRCLE -> new Circle( | ||
| color, | ||
| RANDOM.nextDouble() | ||
| ); | ||
| default -> new IsoscelesTrapezoid( | ||
| color, | ||
| RANDOM.nextDouble(), | ||
| RANDOM.nextDouble(), | ||
| RANDOM.nextDouble() | ||
| ); |
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The random dimensions generated for the figures (e.g., side lengths, radius) are not constrained, which might result in impractically small or large figures. Consider adding constraints to the random values to ensure they fall within a reasonable range.
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