Solution #681
Solution #681
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Thank you for your hard work on this Pull Request! 😊 However, there are a few critical issues that need to be addressed to ensure the code functions correctly and meets the task requirements:
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Descriptor Methods: The
__get__and__set__methods in theIntegerRangeclass are not implemented correctly. The__get__method should return the value stored in the instance, and the__set__method should set the attribute on the instance usingsetattr(instance, self.name, value). -
Slide Class Flexibility: The
Slideclass currently restricts thelimitation_classtoType[AdultSlideLimitationValidator]. It should be more flexible by accepting any child class ofSlideLimitationValidator, usingType[SlideLimitationValidator]. -
Initialization of Validators: The
ChildrenSlideLimitationValidatorandAdultSlideLimitationValidatorshould not directly setage,weight, andheightin their__init__methods. Instead, they should rely on theIntegerRangedescriptors for validation and setting these attributes. -
Error Handling: The
can_accessmethod should handle all possible exceptions that might be raised by thelimitation_class, not justValueErrorandTypeError.
Please address these issues to ensure the code meets the core requirements and functions as expected. Keep up the great work, and feel free to reach out if you have any questions or need further clarification! 🚀
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| raise TypeError | ||
| if not self.min_amount <= value <= self.max_amount: | ||
| raise ValueError | ||
| self.value = value |
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The __set__ method should set the attribute on the instance using setattr(instance, self.name, value) instead of self.value = value. This ensures that the value is correctly assigned to the instance's attribute.
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| def __init__( | ||
| self, | ||
| name: str, | ||
| limitation_class: Type[AdultSlideLimitationValidator] |
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The limitation_class parameter is currently typed as Type[AdultSlideLimitationValidator], which restricts it to only accept AdultSlideLimitationValidator or its subclasses. If you intend to use different validators, consider using a more general type, such as Type[SlideLimitationValidator].
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Great job on improving the code! 🎉 While the Pull Request is approved to help you move forward with your learning, there are a few critical issues that need attention:
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Descriptor Methods: The
__get__method in theIntegerRangeclass should return the value stored in the instance as a single value, not a tuple. Please modify the return type to reflect this. -
Initialization of Validators: Both
ChildrenSlideLimitationValidatorandAdultSlideLimitationValidatorclasses should not directly setage,weight, andheightin their__init__methods. Instead, they should rely on theIntegerRangedescriptors for validation and setting these attributes. -
Error Handling in
can_accessMethod: Thecan_accessmethod should handle all possible exceptions that might be raised by thelimitation_class, not justValueErrorandTypeError. Consider using a more general exception handling approach.
These improvements are crucial for ensuring the code functions correctly and meets the task requirements. Keep up the good work, and make sure to address these issues in future iterations to enhance your coding skills. Happy coding! 🚀
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| def __get__(self, instance: object, owner: Type) -> tuple: | ||
| return getattr(instance, self.privat_name) |
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The __get__ method should return the value stored in the instance as a single value, not a tuple. Modify the return type to reflect this.
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| def __init__(self, age: int, weight: int, height: int) -> None: | ||
| self.age = age | ||
| self.weight = weight | ||
| self.height = height |
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The ChildrenSlideLimitationValidator class should not directly set age, weight, and height in the __init__ method. Instead, it should rely on the IntegerRange descriptors for validation and setting these attributes.
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| def __init__(self, age: int, weight: int, height: int) -> None: | ||
| self.age = age | ||
| self.weight = weight | ||
| self.height = height |
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The AdultSlideLimitationValidator class should not directly set age, weight, and height in the __init__ method. Instead, it should rely on the IntegerRange descriptors for validation and setting these attributes.
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| except (ValueError, TypeError): | ||
| return False |
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The can_access method should handle all possible exceptions that might be raised by the limitation_class, not just ValueError and TypeError. Consider using a more general exception handling approach.
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