Refactor IoT service to use async functionality and fix MessageType #506
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Thank you for your hard work on this project! 🌟 While you've made great progress, there are a few critical issues that need to be addressed to meet the core requirements of the task:
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Asynchronous Implementation: The methods
connect,disconnect, andsend_messageneed to be converted to asynchronous functions usingasync/await. This change is crucial for the task's requirements, as it ensures non-blocking operations. -
Device Registration: The task specifies using
asyncio.gatherfor simultaneous device registration, which is not currently implemented. This is important for optimizing the registration process. -
Program Execution Order: The logical sequence of operations, such as using
run_sequenceandrun_parallel, is not implemented. This is necessary to ensure that operations are executed in the correct order while maximizing parallel execution. -
Code Structure: The task suggests removing certain variables and using helper functions directly, which has not been done. This change is important for maintaining clean and efficient code.
Please address these issues to align the code with the task requirements. Once these changes are made, your solution will be much closer to completion. Keep up the great work, and don't hesitate to reach out if you need further assistance! 😊
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Thank you for your submission! 🎉 Your code demonstrates a solid understanding of asynchronous programming, and you've successfully implemented key features such as async/await and asyncio.gather for parallel operations. This aligns well with the task requirements.
However, there are a few areas for improvement:
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Message Type Handling: Ensure that the
Messageclass usesMessageTypefor themsg_typeattribute. This will help maintain type consistency and improve code readability. -
Device Protocol Compliance: The
register_devicemethod inIOTServiceshould verify that the device being registered implements theDeviceprotocol. Adding a type check or annotation can enforce this and prevent potential runtime errors. -
Asynchronous Message Sending: The
send_messagemethod should be asynchronous. Consider usingasync def send_message(self, message_type: MessageType, data: str = "") -> None:and replacingtime.sleep(TIME_TO_SLEEP)withawait asyncio.sleep(TIME_TO_SLEEP)to ensure non-blocking operations.
These improvements will enhance the robustness and maintainability of your code. Keep up the great work, and continue to refine your skills! Remember, addressing these issues will be crucial for future projects. 😊
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| def send_message(self, message_type: MessageType, | ||
| data: str = "") -> None: | ||
| print( | ||
| f"Hue Light handling message of type {message_type.name} with data [{data}]." | ||
| f"Hue Light handling message of type" | ||
| f" {message_type.name} with data [{data}]." | ||
| ) | ||
| time.sleep(TIME_TO_SLEEP) |
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The send_message method should be asynchronous. Consider using async def send_message(self, message_type: MessageType, data: str = "") -> None: and replacing time.sleep(TIME_TO_SLEEP) with await asyncio.sleep(TIME_TO_SLEEP).
| def send_message(self, message_type: MessageType, | ||
| data: str = "") -> None: | ||
| print( | ||
| f"Smart Speaker handling message of type {message_type.name} with data [{data}]." | ||
| f"Smart Speaker handling message of type" | ||
| f" {message_type.name} with data [{data}]." | ||
| ) | ||
| time.sleep(TIME_TO_SLEEP) |
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The send_message method should be asynchronous. Consider using async def send_message(self, message_type: MessageType, data: str = "") -> None: and replacing time.sleep(TIME_TO_SLEEP) with await asyncio.sleep(TIME_TO_SLEEP).
| def send_message( | ||
| self, message_type: MessageType, | ||
| data: str = "") -> None: | ||
| print( | ||
| f"Smart Toilet handling message of type {message_type.name} with data [{data}]." | ||
| f"Smart Toilet handling message of type " | ||
| f"{message_type.name} with data [{data}]." | ||
| ) | ||
| time.sleep(TIME_TO_SLEEP) |
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The send_message method should be asynchronous. Consider using async def send_message(self, message_type: MessageType, data: str = "") -> None: and replacing time.sleep(TIME_TO_SLEEP) with await asyncio.sleep(TIME_TO_SLEEP).
| msg_type: str, | ||
| content: str = None) -> None: | ||
| self.device_id = device_id | ||
| self.type = msg_type |
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The msg_type attribute in the Message class should be of type MessageType instead of str. Consider changing msg_type: str to msg_type: MessageType in the constructor.
| async def register_device(self, device: str) -> str: | ||
| """Asynchronously register a device.""" | ||
| device_id = str(len(self.devices) + 1) | ||
| self.devices[device_id] = device | ||
| print(f"Device {device.__class__.__name__} " | ||
| f"registered with ID {device_id}") | ||
| return device_id |
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The register_device method in IOTService should ensure that the device being registered implements the Device protocol. Consider adding a type check or annotation to enforce this.
| async def send_message(self, message: Message) -> None: | ||
| """Asynchronously send a message to a device.""" | ||
| print(f"Sending message to device " | ||
| f"{message.device_id}: {message.type}") | ||
| await asyncio.sleep(1) | ||
| print(f"Message sent: " | ||
| f"{message.device_id} - {message.type}") |
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The send_message method in IOTService should ensure that the message type is correctly handled. Verify that the Message class uses MessageType for the msg_type attribute.
