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Thank you for your hard work on this pull request! 😊 While your implementation is solid and covers most of the task requirements, there are a few critical issues that need to be addressed before we can approve it:

  1. Error Handling: Across various components and API interactions, error handling is minimal. It's crucial to implement detailed error handling and logging to manage potential failures and provide feedback to users. This will significantly enhance the robustness and reliability of your application.

  2. State Management and Logic: There are some areas where state management and logic could be simplified for better readability and maintainability. For instance, the logic for toggling showClose and onShowSideBar could be streamlined, and the handleSubmit function should correctly trigger the comment addition logic.

  3. useEffect Dependencies: Ensure that all necessary dependencies are included in the useEffect hooks to prevent issues with stale data and ensure that components react correctly to changes in props or state.

Addressing these points will not only improve the functionality but also the maintainability of your code. Keep up the great work, and I'm confident you'll nail these improvements! 🚀

✨ Please rate this review in the Platform's notification center. I will be grateful for your feedback! ✨

🔄 Fix the issues, commit the changes, and then re-request my review using the Re-request review button in the Reviewers tab.

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getUsers()
.then(setUsers)
.catch(() => setIsError(true));

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Consider providing more detailed error handling or logging in the catch block to help with debugging and understanding what went wrong.

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getPosts(activeUser)
.then(setPosts)
.catch(() => setIsError(true))
.finally(() => setLoading(false));

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Similar to the previous comment, consider enhancing error handling in this catch block for better debugging and user feedback.

import { client } from '../utils/fetchClient';

export const getUsers = () => {
return client.get<User[]>('/users');

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Consider adding error handling for the API request to manage potential failures and provide feedback to the user.

};

export const getPosts = ({ id }: Pick<User, 'id'>) => {
return client.get<Post[]>(`/posts?userId=${id}`);

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Similar to the previous comment, consider implementing error handling for this API request.

};

export const getComments = ({ id }: Pick<Post, 'id'>) => {
return client.get<Comment[]>(`/comments?postId=${id}`);

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Consider adding error handling for this API request to manage potential errors.

</div>
const handleDeleteComment = async (com: Comment) => {
setComments(prev => prev.filter(e => e.id !== com.id));
deleteComment(com);

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Consider awaiting the deleteComment function to ensure that the comment is successfully deleted before updating the state. This will help prevent inconsistencies if the deletion fails.

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setShowClose(!showClose);
onShowSideBar(showClose ? false : true);

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The logic for toggling showClose and onShowSideBar could be simplified for better readability. Consider using a single state to manage the sidebar visibility.

})}
onClick={() => handleChangeButton(post)}
>
{showClose && activePost?.id === post.id ? 'Close' : 'Open'}

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Ensure that the button label accurately reflects the current state of the sidebar. The logic here might be confusing if showClose is not correctly synchronized with the sidebar state.

return () => {
document.removeEventListener('click', handleClickedOutside);
};
}, []);

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Consider adding dependencies to the useEffect hook if the behavior of the event listener should change based on updates to props or state.

>
<div
className="dropdown-trigger"
onClick={() => setShowDropDown(!showDropDown)}

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Ensure that the dropdown is accessible, including support for keyboard navigation and screen readers. This might involve handling keyboard events and providing appropriate ARIA attributes.

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Great job on your submission! 🎉 While the code is generally well-structured and meets many of the task requirements, there are several areas for improvement that you should address to enhance the robustness and user experience of your application:

  1. Error Handling: The current implementation lacks detailed error handling across various components and API functions. Consider adding more informative error messages or logging to aid in debugging and provide better user feedback. Implement retry mechanisms for critical operations like adding and deleting comments.

  2. State Management and Logic: While the state management is mostly well-structured, there are opportunities to simplify logic, particularly in toggling the sidebar and managing active post states. Consider consolidating state updates to improve clarity and efficiency.

  3. useEffect Dependencies: Ensure that all necessary dependencies are included in the useEffect hooks. This will help prevent issues with stale data and ensure that the components behave as expected when dependencies change.

  4. User Feedback: Enhance user feedback mechanisms, especially in form validation and error scenarios. Providing clear feedback can significantly improve the user experience.

  5. PropTypes: Incorporate PropTypes for type-checking React props to catch potential issues early and improve code reliability.

These improvements are crucial for building a robust and user-friendly application. Keep up the good work, and continue refining your code to enhance your learning experience. Remember, addressing these issues will not only help you in this project but also in future endeavors. Keep pushing forward! 🚀

✨ Please rate this review in the Platform's notification center. I will be grateful for your feedback! ✨

useEffect(() => {
getUsers()
.then(setUsers)
.catch(() => setIsError(true));

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The error handling here is minimal. Consider providing more detailed error messages or logging to help with debugging and user feedback.

</div>
getPosts(activeUser)
.then(setPosts)
.catch(() => setIsError(true))

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Similar to the previous comment, the error handling for the getPosts call is minimal. It would be beneficial to provide more detailed error messages or logging.

.catch(() => setIsError(true))
.finally(() => setLoading(false));
}
}, [activeUser]);

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Ensure that all necessary dependencies are included in the useEffect hook. Currently, it only depends on activeUser, which is correct, but make sure this is intentional and no other dependencies are needed.

}, [activeUser]);

const isSideBar =
activePost && showSideBar && activeUser?.id === activePost.userId;

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The logic for determining isSideBar could be simplified or clarified. Ensure that this logic is correct and that it aligns with the intended functionality.

import { client } from '../utils/fetchClient';

export const getUsers = () => {
return client.get<User[]>('/users');

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Consider adding error handling for the getUsers function to manage potential API call failures.

type="button"
className="delete is-small"
aria-label="delete"
onClick={() => handleDeleteComment(comment)}

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Consider adding a confirmation step before deleting a comment to prevent accidental deletions.

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setShowClose(!showClose);
onShowSideBar(showClose ? false : true);

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The logic for toggling showClose and onShowSideBar could be simplified. Consider using a single state update to manage the sidebar visibility and the active post state.

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onActivePost(post);
onShowSideBar(true);

<tr data-cy="Post">
<td data-cy="PostId">18</td>
setShowClose(true);
setActivePost(post);

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Ensure that the logic for setting the active post and showing the sidebar is consistent and doesn't lead to unexpected behavior when switching between posts.

return () => {
document.removeEventListener('click', handleClickedOutside);
};
}, []);

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Ensure that all necessary dependencies are included in the useEffect hook. Currently, it only runs once on mount, which is correct for setting up the event listener, but make sure this is intentional and no other dependencies are needed.

setShowDropDown(false);
onShowSideBar(false);
onActivePost(null);
await pause();

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The pause function is used here, but it's unclear why it is necessary. Ensure that this is intentional and that it serves a specific purpose in the user selection logic.

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