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Thank you for your hard work on this pull request! 😊 While you've made great progress, there are a few critical issues that need to be addressed to ensure the functionality and core requirements are fully met:

  1. Form Submission Handling: The onSubmit function in the NewMovie component needs to explicitly receive the event parameter to prevent default form submission behavior properly. This is crucial for the form to work as expected.

  2. State Update Logic: The onAdd prop in the NewMovie component directly uses setMovies. It's important to update the state based on the previous state to avoid potential issues. Use a function like setMovies(prevMovies => [...prevMovies, newMovie]) to ensure the movie list updates correctly.

  3. Validation on Blur: Implement validation logic for required fields on onBlur to provide immediate feedback to users when fields are left empty.

  4. Form Reset and Error Handling: Ensure that errors are cleared when the form is reset. This will improve the user experience by providing a clean slate after each submission.

  5. Advanced Validation: Consider implementing the optional advanced validation for URL fields to enhance the robustness of your form.

Once these issues are addressed, your code will be in great shape! Keep up the fantastic work, and don't hesitate to reach out if you need any help. 🚀

✨ Please rate this review in the Platform's notification center. I will be grateful for your feedback! ✨

🔄 Fix the issues, commit the changes, and then re-request my review using the Re-request review button in the Reviewers tab.

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</div>
<div className="sidebar">
<NewMovie /* onAdd={(movie) => {}} */ />
<NewMovie onAdd={setMovies} movies={movies} />

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The onAdd prop is directly using setMovies. Ensure that the NewMovie component correctly handles adding a new movie to the existing list. Typically, setMovies should be used with a function that takes the previous state as an argument, like setMovies(prevMovies => [...prevMovies, newMovie]), to avoid potential state update issues.

<form
className="NewMovie"
key={count}
onSubmit={() => {

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The onSubmit function should explicitly receive the event parameter to avoid potential issues. Change the function signature to onSubmit={(event) => { ... }}.

value=""
onChange={() => {}}
value={title}
onChange={setTitle}

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The onChange handler should properly handle the event object. Typically, it should be onChange={(e) => setTitle(e.target.value)} to correctly update the state with the input value.

name="description"
label="Description"
value={description}
onChange={setDescription}

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The onChange handler should properly handle the event object. Typically, it should be onChange={(e) => setDescription(e.target.value)} to correctly update the state with the input value.

name="imgUrl"
label="Image URL"
value={imageUrl}
onChange={setImageUrl}

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The onChange handler should properly handle the event object. Typically, it should be onChange={(e) => setImageUrl(e.target.value)} to correctly update the state with the input value.

name="imdbUrl"
label="Imdb URL"
value={imdbUrl}
onChange={setImdbUrl}

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The onChange handler should properly handle the event object. Typically, it should be onChange={(e) => setImdbUrl(e.target.value)} to correctly update the state with the input value.

name="imdbId"
label="Imdb ID"
value={imdbId}
onChange={setImdbId}

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The onChange handler should properly handle the event object. Typically, it should be onChange={(e) => setImdbId(e.target.value)} to correctly update the state with the input value.

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Great job on making several improvements to your code! 🎉 Your implementation of the App.tsx and NewMovie components shows a solid understanding of React fundamentals, especially in handling form submissions and state updates. Here are some key points to focus on for further enhancement:

  • Form Submission Handling: You've correctly implemented the onSubmit function to prevent default behavior, which is essential for custom form handling.

  • State Update Logic: The use of setMovies(prevMovies => [...prevMovies, newMovie]) ensures that your movie list updates correctly, maintaining the integrity of your state.

  • Validation on Blur: Implementing validation logic on onBlur for required fields is crucial for providing immediate user feedback. This will enhance the user experience by alerting users to any missing information before form submission.

  • Form Reset and Error Handling: Your approach to resetting the form and clearing errors is well-executed, ensuring a smooth user experience after each submission.

  • Advanced Validation: While optional, consider adding advanced validation for URL fields to further improve form robustness.

Remember, addressing these issues will not only meet the task requirements but also improve the overall quality of your code. Keep up the great work, and continue to learn from these experiences to refine your coding skills! 🚀

✨ Please rate this review in the Platform's notification center. I will be grateful for your feedback! ✨

</div>
<div className="sidebar">
<NewMovie /* onAdd={(movie) => {}} */ />
<NewMovie

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Ensure that the NewMovie component is properly handling form submissions and validations. Refer to the previous review comments regarding form submission handling, state update logic, and validation.

<form
className="NewMovie"
key={count}
onSubmit={event => {

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The onSubmit function correctly receives the event parameter and calls preventDefault(), which is a good practice to prevent the default form submission behavior.

imdbId: imdbId,
};

if (!Object.values(newMovie).some(value => !value)) {

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Consider implementing validation logic for required fields on onBlur to provide immediate feedback to users when fields are left empty. This will improve the user experience by ensuring that users are aware of any missing information before attempting to submit the form.


if (!Object.values(newMovie).some(value => !value)) {
onAdd(newMovie);
handleResetForm();

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Ensure that errors are cleared when the form is reset. This will improve the user experience by providing a clean slate after each submission.

name="imgUrl"
label="Image URL"
value={imageUrl}
onChange={(newValue: string) => setImageUrl(newValue)}

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Consider implementing advanced validation for the imgUrl field to ensure that the input is a valid URL. This will enhance the robustness of your form.

name="imdbUrl"
label="Imdb URL"
value={imdbUrl}
onChange={(newValue: string) => setImdbUrl(newValue)}

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Consider implementing advanced validation for the imdbUrl field to ensure that the input is a valid URL. This will enhance the robustness of your form.

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