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ekr authored May 24, 2024
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Expand Up @@ -254,7 +254,7 @@ Instructions are on that page as well. Editorial changes can be
managed in GitHub, but any substantive change should be discussed on
the MLS mailing list.

End-to-end security is a used in the vast majority of instant messaging systems,
End-to-end security is used in the vast majority of instant messaging systems,
and also deployed in systems for other purposes such as calling and conferencing.
In this context, "end-to-end" captures
the notion that users of the system enjoy some level of security -- with the
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be used.

> **RECOMMENDATION:** Ensure that "last resort" KeyPackages don't get used by
> provisionning enough standard KeyPackages.
> provisioning enough standard KeyPackages.

> **RECOMMENDATION:** Rotate "last resort" KeyPackages as soon as possible
> after being used or if they have been stored for a prolonged period of time.
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Delivery Service might fall into:

* Consistent and Partition-tolerant, or Strongly Consistent, systems can provide
a globally consistent view of data but has the inconvenient of clients needing
a globally consistent view of data but has the inconvenience of clients needing
to handle rejected messages;
* Available and Partition-tolerant, or Eventually Consistent, systems continue
working despite network issues but may return different views of data to
different users.

Strategies for sequencing messages in strongly and eventually consistent systems
are described in the next two subsections. Most Delivery Service will use the
are described in the next two subsections. Most Delivery Services will use the
Strongly Consistent paradigm but this remains a choice that can be handled in
coordination with the client and advertized in the KeyPackages.

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manipulated by the DS, but this does not provide complete protection against
partitioning. A DS can cause a partition in the group by partitioning key
exchange messages; this can be detected only by out-of-band comparison (e.g.,
confirming that all clients have the same `epoch_authenticator` value`). A
confirming that all clients have the same `epoch_authenticator` value). A
mechanism for more robust protections is discussed in
{{?I-D.ietf-mls-extensions}}.

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