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Co-authored-by: Steve Persch <[email protected]> Co-authored-by: Scott Buscemi <[email protected]>
pantheon-systems · Dec 11, 2024 · 376c1de · 376c1de
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-title: Tag1 Extended Support module installed on Drupal 7 upstream
+title: Drupal 7 Long-Term Support now operational on Pantheon
 published_date: "2024-12-05"
 categories: [drupal, action-required]
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-The default Pantheon Drupal 7 upstream has been updated to include the Tag1 Drupal 7 Extended Support (D7ES) module.
+The default [Pantheon Drupal 7 upstream](https://github.com/pantheon-systems/drops-7) has been updated to include [the Tag1 Drupal 7 Extended Support (D7ES) module](https://www.drupal.org/project/tag1_d7es). This module is required to take advantage of [Pantheon's Long Term Support (LTS) for Drupal 7](https://pantheon.io/blog/pantheon-and-tag1-support-drupal-7-websites).
 
-Future LTS updates to both Drupal 7 Core and the D7ES module will be available as drops-7 upstream updates. Learn more in our [Drupal 7 LTS documentation](https://docs.pantheon.io/supported-drupal#d7-core-lts-and-platform-compatibility).
+Future LTS updates to both Drupal 7 Core and the D7ES module will be available as updates in Pantheon's Drupal 7 upstream. Learn more in our [Drupal 7 LTS documentation](/supported-drupal#d7-core-lts-and-platform-compatibility).
 
 ## Action Required
 
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 Pantheon is committed to providing security updates for Drupal 7 for at least two additional years beyond its upcoming end-of-life date on January 5, 2025. This commitment is in partnership with Tag1 Consulting, offering Long-Term Support (LTS) for Drupal 7 at no additional cost.
 
-For details about this offering and steps to prepare your sites, refer to our [related documentation](/supported-drupal/#drupal-7-long-term-support).
+For details about this offering and how to configure your sites, refer to our [related documentation](/supported-drupal/#drupal-7-long-term-support).