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I think this now says what was intended...

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@@ -129,14 +129,15 @@ <h2 id="new">Creating a New Identifier</h2>
           <li>Submit a <em>Pull Request</em> for your changes.</li>
         </ol>
         <p>
-The maintainers of this system will then act on that <em>Pull Request</em> and merge it into this 
-system's content which you will then see but in the repository and via resolution of the identifier
-you created or edited.
+The maintainers of this system will then act on that <em>Pull Request</em> and
+merge it into this system's content. You will then be able to see your changes
+in the repository and via resolution of the identifier you created or edited.
         </p>
         <p>
-If the terms <em>Fork</em> and <em>Pull Request</em> are new to you, you need to familiarize yourself with the 
-<a href="https://git-scm.com/">Git</a> version control system and <a href="https://github.com/">GitHub</a>, the platform used to host this system. 
-Please see this documentation:
+If the terms <em>Fork</em> and <em>Pull Request</em> are new to you, you need
+to familiarize yourself with the <a href="https://git-scm.com/">Git</a> version
+control system and <a href="https://github.com/">GitHub</a>, the platform used
+to host this system.  Please see this documentation:
         </p>
         <ul>
           <li><a href="https://docs.github.com/en/github-ae@latest/github/getting-started-with-github/fork-a-repo">Forking a Repository</a></li>