Epinio landing page: apply feedback from #945

versioned_docs/version-2.8/integrations-in-rancher/elemental/elemental.md

@@ -23,5 +23,5 @@ Elemental in Rancher:
 ## Elemental with Rancher Prime 
 
 - Deeply integrated already as GUI Extension in Rancher. 
-- Extends the Rancher story to OS. Working perfectly with SLE Micro for Rrancher today, in future with SLE Micro. Selling the full stack. 
+- Extends the Rancher story to the OS. Working perfectly with SLE Micro for Rancher today.
 

versioned_docs/version-2.8/integrations-in-rancher/epinio/epinio.md

@@ -6,17 +6,17 @@ title: Application Development Engine with Epinio
   <link rel="canonical" href="https://ranchermanager.docs.rancher.com/integrations-in-rancher/epinio"/>
 </head>
 
-Epinio lets developers go from application sources to URL in a single step. Epinio is an Application Development Platform. It deploys on Kubernetes and lets application developers and operators work together without conflict. 
+Epinio is a Kubernetes-based Application Development Platform. It helps operators and developers collaborate without conflict, and accelerates the development process. With Epinio, teams can move from application sources to a live URL in a single step.
 
 ## Epinio with Rancher  
 
-Epinio's integration with Rancher lets developers quickly start using it without having to deal with the installation process or the configuration. You can install Epinio from the Apps. Currently the team is working to have Epinio available as a Rancher extension.
+Epinio's integration with Rancher gives developers a jump start, without having to deal with the installation process or configuration. You can install Epinio directly from the Rancher UI's Apps page.
 
 ## Epinio with Rancher Prime 
 
-On top of the specific support service, Rancher Prime customers of Epinio should expect better integration of Epinio with other Rancher projects such as: 
+Rancher Prime customers can expect better integration of Epinio with other areas in the Rancher ecosystem such as:
 
 - Better integration with Rancher authentication.  
-- Integrating Neuvector/Kubewarden with Epinio.
-- Using a custom Chart template with the right annotations to integrate with monitoring for example.
-- A better service marketplace.
+- Integration with Neuvector and Kubewarden.
+- Custom Helm chart templates with preset annotations to seamlessly integrate with monitoring and other key tools.
+- Improved service marketplace.