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 # About Relaycorp
 
-We build technologies to solve some of the most pressing communication challenges that humankind faces,
-starting with Internet blackouts.
-Namely:
+We're incubating the following technologies to pave the way for solving some of humanity's most pressing and neglected communication challenges,
+starting with Internet blackouts:
 
 - [Awala](https://awala.network), a new computer network where apps can communicate with and without the Internet. It also offers end-to-end encryption and spam protection.
 - [Letro](https://letro.app/en/), an Awala-powered email alternative, so it works with and without the Internet, supports end-to-end encryption, and is spam-resistant.
 - [VeraId](https://veraid.net), an offline authentication protocol that allows data to be securely attributed to domain names (e.g. `example.com`) and users (e.g. `[email protected]`). VeraId powers Letro.
-- [Despacito](https://despacito.bot), a rate limiting protocol that mitigates DDoS attacks. It's based on the work we did for [the DDoS Report](https://ddos.report/).
+- [Despacito](https://despacito.bot), a rate limiting protocol that mitigates DDoS attacks. It's based on the research we did for [the DDoS Report](https://ddos.report/).
 
 If you wish to contact us, please email [[email protected]](mailto:[email protected]) and make sure to include the word "relaying" somewhere in the email (if you don't, it'll be automatically deleted).