doc: resolve typos

smallbunnies · Dec 13, 2024 · 010b2b5 · 010b2b5
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@@ -9,7 +9,8 @@ Solverz supports three types of abstract equation types, that are
 
 where $p$ is the parameter set of your models, $y_0$ is the previous time node value of $y$.
 
-For example, we want to know how long it takes for an apple to fall from a tree to the ground. We have the DAE 
+Say, we want to know how long it will take for an apple, launched from the ground into the air, to fall back to the
+ground. We have the differential equations 
 
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 \begin{aligned}

diff --git a/docs/src/intro.md b/docs/src/intro.md
@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@
 
 Solverz aims to help you model and solve your equations more efficiently.
 
-Say, we want to know how long it takes for an apple to fall from a tree to the ground. We have the 
-differential equations 
+Say, we want to know how long it will take for an apple, launched from the ground into the air, to fall back to the 
+ground. We have the differential equations 
 
 ```{math}
 \left\{