editorial, line break, diverse clause

w3c · Jan 10, 2025 · ef03aaf · ef03aaf
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 		**Free to Implement**: Our standards are rooted in a strong royalty-free patent policy
 		and open copyright licenses.
 	<li id=voluntary-impl>
-		**Voluntary to Implement**: Our standards span many use-cases and diverse industries, 
-                are thus developed to be voluntarily adopted, and success is determined by the market.
+		**Voluntary to Implement**: Our standards span many diverse use-cases and industries, 
+                are thus developed to be voluntarily adopted, 
+		and success is determined by the market.
 	<li id=open>
 		**Open Participation**: We welcome individuals and organizations of all sizes
 		(from single-person companies to multi-nationals),