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<Pyromaniac18.titleShort>TODO</Pyromaniac18.titleShort> | ||||||
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<!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef]'s mother was often ill, and it fell to [PAWN_objective] to run the store which was their only source of income. [PAWN_pronoun] learned a little about the exotic artifacts which [PAWN_pronoun] sold, and a lot about the art of the deal. --> | ||||||
<ShopKid36.baseDesc>TODO</ShopKid36.baseDesc> | ||||||
<ShopKid36.baseDesc>Маці [PAWN_nameDef] часта хварэла, таму {PAWN_gender ? яму : ёй} давялося {PAWN_gender ? самаму : самой} даглядаць за крамай, якая была адзінай крыніцай заробку ў сям'і. [PAWN_pronoun] трохі ведае пра атрэфакты, якія {PAWN_gender ? прадаваў : прадавала} і добра цяміць у мастацтве гандлю.</ShopKid36.baseDesc> | ||||||
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<ShopKid36.title>TODO</ShopKid36.title> | ||||||
<ShopKid36.title>дзіця крамы</ShopKid36.title> | ||||||
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<ShopKid36.titleShort>TODO</ShopKid36.titleShort> | ||||||
<ShopKid36.titleShort>дзіця крамы</ShopKid36.titleShort> | ||||||
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<!-- EN: As a child, [PAWN_nameDef] suffered from a rare disease. Quarantined in a hospital, [PAWN_pronoun] had minimal human contact and got little physical exercise. In the sterile hospital environment, however, [PAWN_pronoun] became very familiar with science and medicine. --> | ||||||
<SicklyChild55.baseDesc>TODO</SicklyChild55.baseDesc> | ||||||
<SicklyChild55.baseDesc>З самага маленства [PAWN_nameDef] {PAWN_gender ? пакутваў : пакутвала} ад рэдкай хваробы. Знаходзячыся ў лякарні, {PAWN_gender ? ён меў : яна мела} мінімальны кантакт з людзьмі і фізічнымі практыкаваннямі. Аднак, у стэрыльным медыцынскім асяроддзі [PAWN_pronoun] блізка {PAWN_gender ? пазнаёміўся : пазнаёмілася} з навукай і лекамі.</SicklyChild55.baseDesc> | ||||||
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Па першай прапанове [nit], прапаную толькі часцей ужывальную форму. |
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<SicklyChild55.title>TODO</SicklyChild55.title> | ||||||
<SicklyChild55.title>хворае дзіцё</SicklyChild55.title> | ||||||
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<SicklyChild55.titleShort>TODO</SicklyChild55.titleShort> | ||||||
<SicklyChild55.titleShort>пацыэнт</SicklyChild55.titleShort> | ||||||
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Актуальны правапіс |
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<!-- EN: As a child, [PAWN_nameDef] was addicted to reading. [PAWN_pronoun] would spend all day in [PAWN_possessive] local library with [PAWN_possessive] nose in a book. When budget cuts forced the library to close, [PAWN_nameDef] was distraught. [PAWN_pronoun] decided to fill the gap by writing [PAWN_possessive] own stories instead. --> | ||||||
<StoryWriter67.baseDesc>TODO</StoryWriter67.baseDesc> | ||||||
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<ShamanOfShadows47.titleShort>TODO</ShamanOfShadows47.titleShort> | ||||||
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<!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was in a deep space shock troop unit deployed on multiple planets in various wars.\n\nDuring a risky assault, [PAWN_possessive] whole unit was wiped out. Nobody else knew what happened on the field that day, but [PAWN_nameDef] will carry the burden forever. --> | ||||||
<ShockTrooper15.baseDesc>TODO</ShockTrooper15.baseDesc> | ||||||
<ShockTrooper15.baseDesc>[PAWN_nameDef] {PAWN_gender ? быў : была} жаўнерам ударнага атраду далёкага космасу, які ўдзельнічаў у шматлікіх войнах на некалькіх планетах.\n\nПадчас рызыкоўнага штурму [PAWN_possessive] атрад быў знішчаны ўшчэнт. Ніхто ня ведае што адбылося тым днём, але [PAWN_nameDef] будзе насіць гэты цяжар да скону.</ShockTrooper15.baseDesc> | ||||||
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There was a problem hiding this comment. Choose a reason for hiding this commentThe reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more. Па першай прапанове [nit], я б неяк перарабіў, трошкі ўрэзалась у вочы |
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<ShockTrooper15.title>TODO</ShockTrooper15.title> | ||||||
<ShockTrooper15.title>жаўнер</ShockTrooper15.title> | ||||||
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[nit] Усё ж жаўнер - форма больш агульная |
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<ShockTrooper15.titleShort>TODO</ShockTrooper15.titleShort> | ||||||
<ShockTrooper15.titleShort>жаўнер</ShockTrooper15.titleShort> | ||||||
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<!-- EN: As a lawyer, [PAWN_nameDef] could convict a deaf man for stealing music. [PAWN_possessive] sharp mind and lack of empathy let [PAWN_objective] say anything to get the other person to talk. With the right amount of money, [PAWN_pronoun] knew, any case can be won.\n\n[PAWN_possessive] childhood cough never went away. --> | ||||||
<SicklyLawyer49.baseDesc>TODO</SicklyLawyer49.baseDesc> | ||||||
<SicklyLawyer49.baseDesc>Як і належыць адвакату, [PAWN_nameDef] можа абвінаваціць нямога ў зняважлівых выкрыках. [PAWN_possessive] востры розум і немагчымасць да спачування дазволіць любога чалавека размаўляць. [PAWN_pronoun] ведаў што з неабходнай колькасцю грошай можна перамагчы ў любым судзе.\n\n Кашаль пераследуе [PAWN_possessive] з дзяцінства.</SicklyLawyer49.baseDesc> | ||||||
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<SicklyLawyer49.title>TODO</SicklyLawyer49.title> | ||||||
<SicklyLawyer49.title>хворы адвакат</SicklyLawyer49.title> | ||||||
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<SicklyLawyer49.titleShort>TODO</SicklyLawyer49.titleShort> | ||||||
<SicklyLawyer49.titleShort>адвакат</SicklyLawyer49.titleShort> | ||||||
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<!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] traveled the stars. [PAWN_pronoun] could barely scrape together travel costs doing odd-jobs, but it was all worth it.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] loved camping in exotic places and learning the patterns of strange wildlife. [PAWN_pronoun] never could focus on intellectual endeavors, as [PAWN_possessive] sightseeing distracted [PAWN_objective] far too much. --> | ||||||
<Sightseer70.baseDesc>TODO</Sightseer70.baseDesc> | ||||||
<Sightseer70.baseDesc>[PAWN_nameDef] {PAWN_gender ? падарожнічаў : падарожнічала} па зоркавым сістэмам. [PAWN_pronoun] ледзь {PAWN_gender ? пакрыў : пакрыла} страты на падарожжы, выконваючы марудную працу, але яно таго каштавала. \n\n {PAWN_gender ? яму : ёй} падабалася TODO</Sightseer70.baseDesc> | ||||||
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Страты - гэта ад слова |
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<Sightseer70.title>TODO</Sightseer70.title> | ||||||
<Sightseer70.title>вандроўнік</Sightseer70.title> | ||||||
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<Sightseer70.titleShort>TODO</Sightseer70.titleShort> | ||||||
<Sightseer70.titleShort>вандроўнік</Sightseer70.titleShort> | ||||||
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<!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] became a gifted pharmaceutical scientist, but was captured by slavers. [PAWN_pronoun] was sold to a warlord and forced to create drugs to test on other slaves. This left [PAWN_objective] with deep and troubling questions on the ethics of scientific research and medicine. --> | ||||||
<SlaveChemist84.baseDesc>TODO</SlaveChemist84.baseDesc> | ||||||
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С коскай мяркую зразумела.
[nit] Прапаную прыбраць
гэта
, назоўнік ужо ёсць у сказе.Наконт
ня
: такой формы няма ў актуальным правапісе (https://pravilna.by/rules/40/), на жаль