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Thank you for your hard work on this Pull Request! 😊 While your implementation is mostly correct and aligns with the task requirements, there are a couple of critical issues that need to be addressed before we can approve it:
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Static Method Usage: The
sell_product
method of theCinemaBar
class should be used as a static method. Currently, it seems like there might be confusion in how it's being called. Please ensure that you are not creating an instance ofCinemaBar
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Variable Overwriting: The
cleaner
parameter is being overwritten by aCleaner
instance on line 14. This can lead to confusion and potential errors. It's important to use a different variable name for theCleaner
instance to maintain clarity and avoid overwriting the parameter.
Once these issues are resolved, your code should work as expected. Keep up the great work, and I look forward to seeing the updated version! 🚀
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🔄 Fix the issues, commit the changes, and then re-request my review using the Re-request review
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def cinema_visit(customers: list, | ||
hall_number: int, | ||
cleaner: str, |
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The cleaner
parameter is being overwritten by a Cleaner
instance on line 14. Consider using a different variable name for the Cleaner
instance to avoid confusion and potential errors.
cleaner = Cleaner(cleaner) | ||
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for customer in customer_list: | ||
CinemaBar.sell_product(customer.food, customer) |
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Ensure that the sell_product
method of CinemaBar
is used correctly as a static method. According to the task description, you should not create an instance of CinemaBar
to call this method.
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Review Summary
Great job on your implementation! 🎉 Your code meets the task requirements and constraints, and the overall structure is well-aligned with the task description. Here are some key points and suggestions for improvement:
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Static Method Usage: The
sell_product
method in theCinemaBar
class is correctly implemented and used as a static method. Ensure this usage is consistent throughout your codebase to adhere to the task requirements. -
Variable Overwriting: There is a critical issue with variable overwriting in the
CinemaHall
class. Make sure to address this to prevent potential bugs. Additionally, in thecinema_visit
function, avoid using thecleaning_staff
parameter as aCleaner
instance. Instead, use a different variable name to maintain clarity and avoid confusion. -
Class Implementations: The
Cleaner
andCustomer
class implementations are correct and require no changes. Keep up the good work!
Your code is approved to help you move forward with your learning journey. However, please review the comments and address the critical issues mentioned to improve your code quality and avoid similar problems in the future. Keep learning and refining your skills! 🚀
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def movie_session(self, | ||
movie_name: str, | ||
customers: list, | ||
cleaning_staff: Cleaner |
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The cleaning_staff
parameter is being used as a Cleaner
instance. This can lead to confusion and potential errors. It's important to use a different variable name for the Cleaner
instance to maintain clarity and avoid overwriting the parameter. Consider renaming the parameter to something like cleaner
to avoid this issue.
cleaner_person = Cleaner(cleaner) | ||
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for customer in customer_list: | ||
CinemaBar.sell_product(customer.food, customer) |
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The sell_product
method of the CinemaBar
class is correctly used as a static method here. Ensure that this usage is consistent throughout your codebase, as per the task requirements.
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