Solution #1642
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Thank you for your hard work on this pull request! 😊 While your implementation of the Person class and the create_person_list function is mostly on point, there are a couple of critical issues that need to be addressed before we can approve it:
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peopleDictionary: Thepeopledictionary is currently a class variable, which means it is shared across all instances of thePersonclass. This might not be the intended behavior, as it can lead to unexpected results when managing multiplePersoninstances. Consider moving thepeopledictionary to an instance variable by defining it within the__init__method. -
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peopleDictionary: Thecreate_person_listfunction does not clear thepeopledictionary before adding new entries. This could lead to incorrect results if the function is called multiple times with different data. Make sure to clear the dictionary at the start of this function to ensure it only contains the current list of people.
Once these issues are resolved, your code will be more robust and aligned with the task requirements. Keep up the great work, and feel free to reach out if you have any questions or need further assistance! 🚀
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| class Person: | |||
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| people: dict = {} | |||
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The people dictionary is defined as a class variable, meaning it is shared across all instances of the Person class. If you intend for each Person instance to have its own people dictionary, you should define it within the __init__ method instead.
app/main.py
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| def create_person_list(people: list) -> list: | ||
| # write your code here | ||
| pass | ||
| for person in people: | ||
| Person(person["name"], person["age"]) | ||
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| for person in people: | ||
| current = Person.people[person["name"]] | ||
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| if "wife" in person and person["wife"] is not None: | ||
| current.wife = Person.people[person["wife"]] | ||
| if "husband" in person and person["husband"] is not None: | ||
| current.husband = Person.people[person["husband"]] | ||
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| return [Person.people[name] for name in Person.people] |
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The create_person_list function does not clear the Person.people dictionary before adding new entries. This could lead to incorrect results if the function is called multiple times with different data. Consider clearing the dictionary at the start of this function to ensure it only contains the current list of people.
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Great job on implementing the Person class and the create_person_list function! 🎉 While your code meets the basic requirements, there are a few critical issues that need attention to ensure it functions correctly:
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Shared
peopleDictionary: Thepeopledictionary is currently a class variable, which means it is shared across all instances of thePersonclass. This can lead to unexpected behavior when managing multiplePersoninstances. Consider moving thepeopledictionary to an instance variable by defining it within the__init__method. -
Clearing the
peopleDictionary: Thecreate_person_listfunction does not clear thepeopledictionary before adding new entries. This could result in incorrect data if the function is called multiple times with different inputs. Make sure to clear the dictionary at the start of this function to ensure it only contains the current list of people. -
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dict.get()Method: Simplify your code and avoid potentialKeyErrorexceptions by using thedict.get()method instead of explicit key checks like"wife" in person and person["wife"] is not None. -
List Comprehension: Consider using list comprehension to create a list of instances from a collection, as it is more concise and aligns with best practices.
These improvements will help you avoid potential issues and enhance the functionality of your code. Keep up the great work, and continue learning from these experiences! 🚀
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| class Person: | |||
| # write your code here | |||
| pass | |||
| people = {} | |||
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The people dictionary is a class variable, which means it is shared across all instances of the Person class. This can lead to unexpected behavior when managing multiple Person instances. Consider moving the people dictionary to an instance variable by defining it within the __init__ method.
| def __init__(self, name: str, age: int) -> None: | ||
| self.name = name | ||
| self.age = age | ||
| Person.people[name] = self | ||
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| def create_person_list(people: list) -> list: |
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The create_person_list function does not clear the people dictionary before adding new entries. This could lead to incorrect results if the function is called multiple times with different data. Make sure to clear the dictionary at the start of this function to ensure it only contains the current list of people.
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