Develop #2697

Jion353 · 2024-12-17T19:57:13Z

alechsva

good job

mateacademy-ai-mentor

Thank you for your hard work on this project! 🚀 While your code meets many of the task requirements, there are a few critical issues that need to be addressed before we can approve the pull request:

State and Dependency Management: The useEffect hook in TodoModal.tsx should include todo as a dependency to ensure it runs correctly when todo changes. Additionally, the dependency array in App.tsx includes isLoad, which may lead to unnecessary re-renders. If the effect is meant to run only once, consider using an empty array [].
Naming Conventions: Several variable names do not follow common conventions, which can impact code readability and maintainability:
- isLoad should be renamed to isLoading.
- isModalSee should be renamed to isModalVisible.
- qwerty should be renamed to searchQuery.
- curentTodos has a typo and should be corrected to currentTodos, or better yet, filteredTodos to reflect its purpose.
Code Simplification: Consider using optional chaining and logical operators to simplify your code. For example, using todos?.map(...) and selectedTodo?.id === todo.id && 'has-background-info-light' can make your code more concise and easier to read.

Please address these issues to ensure the code is robust and maintainable. Once these changes are made, we can move forward with the approval. Keep up the great work, and don't hesitate to reach out if you have any questions! 😊

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mateacademy-ai-mentor · 2024-12-17T23:44:09Z

src/App.tsx


 export const App: React.FC = () => {
+  const [isLoad, setIsLoad] = useState(true);


The state variable isLoad is not named according to common conventions. Consider renaming it to isLoading for better readability and to follow the convention of using present participles for boolean state variables.

mateacademy-ai-mentor · 2024-12-17T23:44:09Z

src/App.tsx


 export const App: React.FC = () => {
+  const [isLoad, setIsLoad] = useState(true);
+  const [isModalSee, setIsModalSee] = useState(false);


The state variable isModalSee is not named according to common conventions. Consider renaming it to isModalVisible for better readability and to follow the convention of using present participles for boolean state variables.

mateacademy-ai-mentor · 2024-12-17T23:44:09Z

src/App.tsx

+    setTimeout(() => {
+      setIsLoad(false);
+    }, 1000);
+  }, [isLoad]);


The dependency array for the useEffect hook includes isLoad. This means the effect will run every time isLoad changes, which might not be the intended behavior. If you want the effect to run only once when the component mounts, consider using an empty dependency array [].

mateacademy-ai-mentor · 2024-12-17T23:44:09Z

src/components/TodoFilter/TodoFilter.tsx

+};
+
+export const TodoFilter: React.FC<Props> = ({ setTodos }) => {
+  const [qwerty, setQwerty] = useState('');


The variable name qwerty is not descriptive. Consider renaming it to something more meaningful, such as searchQuery, to better convey its purpose.

mateacademy-ai-mentor · 2024-12-17T23:44:09Z

src/components/TodoFilter/TodoFilter.tsx

+
+  useEffect(() => {
+    getTodos().then(serverTodos => {
+      let curentTodos: Todo[] | null = serverTodos.filter(todo =>


There is a typo in the variable name curentTodos. It should be currentTodos to correctly spell 'current'.

mateacademy-ai-mentor · 2024-12-17T23:44:09Z

src/components/TodoList/TodoList.tsx

-        </td>
-      </tr>
+  function mapTodos() {
+    if (todos) {


Consider using optional chaining to simplify the check for todos. For example, todos?.map(...) can be used to handle the case where todos is null or undefined.

mateacademy-ai-mentor · 2024-12-17T23:44:09Z

src/components/TodoList/TodoList.tsx

+        <tr
+          data-cy="todo"
+          className={
+            selectedTodo !== null


The conditional rendering logic for class names can be simplified using optional chaining and logical operators. For example, selectedTodo?.id === todo.id && 'has-background-info-light' can be used to make the code more concise.

mateacademy-ai-mentor · 2024-12-17T23:44:09Z

src/components/TodoModal/TodoModal.tsx

+};
+
+export const TodoModal: React.FC<Props> = ({ setVisible, todo, setTodo }) => {
+  const [isLoad, setIsLoad] = useState(true);


The state variable isLoad is not named according to common conventions. Consider renaming it to isLoading for better readability and to follow the convention of using present participles for boolean state variables.

mateacademy-ai-mentor · 2024-12-17T23:44:09Z

src/components/TodoModal/TodoModal.tsx

+    if (todo) {
+      getUser(todo.userId).then(setUser);
+    }
+  }, []);


The useEffect hook should include todo as a dependency. This ensures that the effect runs whenever todo changes, which is important for fetching the correct user data when a different todo is selected.

mateacademy-ai-mentor · 2024-12-17T23:44:10Z

src/components/TodoModal/TodoModal.tsx

+  }, []);
+
+  if (!todo) {
+    return;


The return statement here does not return any JSX or null, which may lead to unexpected behavior. Consider returning null explicitly if the todo is not available.

mateacademy-ai-mentor

Thank you for your submission! 🎉 Your code is generally well-structured and follows good practices, but there are a few areas that could be improved to enhance readability and maintainability:

State and Dependency Management:
- In TodoModal.tsx, consider adding todo to the useEffect dependency array to ensure it re-runs when the todo prop changes. This will allow the component to fetch the correct user data for the new todo.
- In App.tsx, verify that the useEffect hook is intended to run only once with an empty dependency array, as it will not react to changes in any state or props.
Naming Conventions:
- In TodoFilter.tsx, renaming the variable qwerty to searchQuery would better reflect its purpose and improve code readability.
Code Simplification:
- Consider using optional chaining when accessing properties of potentially null or undefined objects, such as serverTodos?.filter(...), todos?.map(...), and selectedTodo?.id === todo.id && 'has-background-info-light'.

These changes will help make your code more robust and maintainable. Keep up the great work, and continue to learn from these suggestions to improve your coding skills! 🚀

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mateacademy-ai-mentor · 2024-12-18T07:43:54Z

src/App.tsx

+  useEffect(() => {
+    setTimeout(() => {
+      setIsLoading(false);
+    }, 1000);
+  }, []);


The useEffect hook is set to run only once with an empty dependency array. Ensure this is the intended behavior, as it will not react to changes in any state or props.

mateacademy-ai-mentor · 2024-12-18T07:43:54Z

src/App.tsx

+                  todos={todos}
+                  selectedTodo={todo}


Consider using optional chaining when accessing properties of potentially null or undefined objects, e.g., todos?.map(...) and selectedTodo?.id === todo.id && 'has-background-info-light'.

mateacademy-ai-mentor · 2024-12-18T07:43:55Z

src/components/TodoFilter/TodoFilter.tsx

+};
+
+export const TodoFilter: React.FC<Props> = ({ setTodos }) => {
+  const [qwerty, setQwerty] = useState('');


Consider renaming qwerty to searchQuery to better reflect its purpose and improve code readability.

mateacademy-ai-mentor · 2024-12-18T07:43:55Z

src/components/TodoFilter/TodoFilter.tsx

+      let currentTodos: Todo[] | null = serverTodos.filter(todo =>
+        todo.title.toLocaleLowerCase().includes(qwerty.toLocaleLowerCase()),
+      );


Consider using optional chaining when accessing properties of potentially null or undefined objects, e.g., serverTodos?.filter(...).

mateacademy-ai-mentor · 2024-12-18T07:43:55Z

src/components/TodoModal/TodoModal.tsx

+  useEffect(() => {
+    setTimeout(() => {
+      setIsLoading(false);
+    }, 1000);
+
+    if (todo) {
+      getUser(todo.userId).then(setUser);
+    }
+  }, []);


Consider adding todo to the dependency array of the useEffect hook to ensure it re-runs when the todo prop changes. This will allow the component to fetch the correct user data for the new todo.

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		export const App: React.FC = () => {
		const [isLoad, setIsLoad] = useState(true);

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